Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

An excellent lune poem, my friend. This is a form I often don't care for, but with your delightful words, I may have to reassess that. Congrats on the well deserved win~Debbie

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

What a spectacular presentation--I relished your embedding your lune in the striking picture! I admired your thought-provoking observation as well. A well-deserved win! Big cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018

Comment from Realist101

Excellent

Congratulations Mikey! JUST gorgeous! Sorry I missed this before. Your work doesn't come anymore. Love this poem!!!! Very deserving of this win. Susan

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018

Comment from BrendaGayle

Exceptional

I can see why you won the contest. This is exceptional. Love the title. The picture was such a great addition. It allows one to think, to contemplate.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Penetrating and insightful, my friend. I can see what this won. Congrats! Excellent entry. Excellent presentation. Nice internal rhyme.

Love,
rd

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018

Comment from Contests

A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018

Comment from Gloria ....

Exceptional

Wow! This is fantastic, Mav. A beautiful presentation and a thought-provoking poem. Of course the entire moon is still there, and thank goodness it will come back into fullness.

This IS exceptional and I wish you best luck on this perfect to form entry.

Ange

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Aww ... thanks so much, Ange. I've been trying to take a page from your book and simplify my shorter pieces. I don't know why I think everything has to be an epic, but ...

In any case, I am thrilled you like this. I was hoping you might. I'm all smiles. Maybe the committee will be as brilliant as you in their assessment. LOL

:)) Mav xx

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Mike, This is a very well written Lune poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good imagery with the art work and very good wording that seemed to be explaining a point of why the relationship may not be working. Best wishes in the contest. teri

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Hello, :)

Good poem, Michael. I wonder if you will respond to this. I bet you are very busy.
How are you doing? I hope you are fine.

Take care,
Nome

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018

Hi, Nome

Are you sitting down? LOL

Yeah, I'm crazy busy and I TRY not to post so I don't have reviews I don't respond to. I just can't help but write something every now and then. I'm so pleased you liked this and glad to see you around again. It seems like you were gone for a while, yes?

I'm fine. You know you can always message me if you want a review or need anything. mike

reply by Rasmine on 26-Jan-2018

Wow, you noticed I was gone for awhile. It was the computer's fault. Now I am on the apartment computer.
Hey, take care, and I know you do a saintly job. :) Earth angel. :D

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a Lovely Lune Poetry Contest entry.
Nicely said, and the picture that you have posted your poem on beautiful match.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018