Comment from bookishfabler

Excellent

Was this the answer? To prayer? To his problems? Could it be . . .?

Was this the answer to his prayers; to his problems?

I see you moved ahead and wrote about your son. I know it can't be easy

Hang in there
hugs HEidi

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2016

Thank you for your thoughtful review. I will edit to make the changes you suggested. Thanks for the encouragement. I'd started this chapter and thought I would push through. The next chapter could be hard, so it may wait until after the New Year unless I'm really inspired. Thanks for coming along on the journey.
~patty~

Comment from MelB

Excellent

I'm glad he's made the decision to go get help. I've been watching this show called Intervention. It's awful how drugs overtake these people's lives. It makes me so sad.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2016

Thank you for your time to read and review. Your comments help me to continue with this project. I've watched many episodes of 'Intervention.' The show gives me hope.
~patty~

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Hello again my friend when a person is drug taking it takes a toll on there lives because that is all they can think of getting their next fix and will do anything to get it destroy anything in their path including loved ones , although they don't mean too to take an offer of rehab takes a lot and they are very brave , it is a long journey and it does take time but they can get their well done on this write regards Jill

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2016

Thank you for your time to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed this next installment of the journey. I appreciate your comments.
~patty~

Comment from loismddavis

Excellent

This is a clear and concise story about a time in the life of a young man when an important decision can possibly be a life or death one. You writing made me feel the urgency of the situation, how difficult it often is for an addict take the plunge into sobriety. Very good writing.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2016

Thank you so much for your time to read and review. Your comments are greatly appreciated. The next few chapters will be hard to write, and I need some self-confidence.
~patty~

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Excellent. Sounds like you are off to a good start with this story. It seems to be quite interesting and easy to follow and understand. I wish you the best with this.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2016

Thank you for your time to read and review. I'm very thankful for your comments. I was worried it wasn't interesting enough, but only a 'bridge' to the next chapter.
Hope your holiday season is wonderful.
~patty~

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Another good and well written instalment to the story. the internalising is very good and the emotional reasoning come through really well.

Nice job
GMG

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2016

Thank you for your time to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed this installment. I appreciate your comments. Hope your holiday season is wonderful.
~patty~