Comment from John Parkin

Excellent

Excellent Triolet and the subject matter and rhyming are great. A million verses are written about his love and how he forgives and you expressed it nicely in eight lines of poetry.

 Comment Written 11-May-2016

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reply by the author on 13-May-2016

John, Thank you for taking the time to read ,comment and the five stars God Bless.

reply by John Parkin on 13-May-2016

your welcome.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

To have a thankful heart is always beautiful. That is the one thing that really matters to God, that we will be grateful for what we have and not tell about the things we don't have.

 Comment Written 11-May-2016

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reply by the author on 13-May-2016

I agree with you,I thank you for taking the time to read my poem ,comment on it and the five stars.God Bless

Comment from pmait

Excellent

The triolet works well, and expresses sentiments that I share with you. My one suggestion, since you have periods at the end of each line, but not all of them are complete sentences, is to drop all of the periods and let the line change serve your purpose.

 Comment Written 11-May-2016

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reply by the author on 13-May-2016

Thank you for reading and sharing your suggestion on how to make it better,I will go back and drop the periods.God Bless

Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

A beautiful declaration of your faith for the contest, I enjoyed each and every word, thank you. Nice presentation. Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 11-May-2016

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reply by the author on 13-May-2016

Thank you for your kind comment,five stars and good wishes God Bless you

Comment from Joyce Long

Excellent

Best wishes for the Triolet poetry contest. You have expressed my thoughts about my loving Lord and Savior very well. Great job. Thanks for sharing your ideas.
Joyce 05-11-16

 Comment Written 11-May-2016

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reply by the author on 13-May-2016

Thank you Joyce, Hope you have a Bless day.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Through the blood of Jesus Christ you son your Son .............I believe you intended to write "your" here, not "you". In addition, when paying homage to the Almighty, it's usually customary to capitalize any names associated with Him...

Nice Triolet, and just in time for the contest too, Mystery Poet
Well done...

 Comment Written 11-May-2016

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reply by the author on 13-May-2016

Dean,Thank you pointing out my mistakes, I did intend to write "your son" I went back and fixed it.Thank you for the help God Bless

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Excellent triolet. Reading your poem gave me a warm feeling, it brought me closer to God. The picture added to your prayerful words, which made your work more special. God bless you.

 Comment Written 11-May-2016

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reply by the author on 13-May-2016

Thank you I am glad you enjoyed it and felt closer to GOD.God Bless