Comment from ann marie mazz

Excellent

good evening gypsy blue

the entry has met the challenge
the format is true to form
we readers see the moment in time
and yes
we see the lightning
your words are vibrant and vivid
well done

thank you for sharing your talent
enjoy the night
ann marie

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind words, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from I am Cat

Excellent

It IS alive! WOW! What a piece of artwork to go with this lovely
haiku!
Well done... And good luck in the contest!
;)
Mwah Mwah
S.Cat

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015

Thank you Sister Cat :) You are very kind.
(((((gypsy kisses)))))))

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

Great presentation.

I'm not sure I like the stark run-on of lines 1 and 2. Line 1 ending in 'and' just doesn't seem right - why not drop it altogether? I'm sure you have your reasons...

Powerful last line.

Good luck.

Steve

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the awesome review and kind words, I really appreciate it. :) the first two lines have to be connected, the 'and' connects line one to line two.

Comment from Javed05

Excellent

this poem really good...........found it engaging for the reader......it flows smoothly ......language is great......creates good imagery in the reader's mind .....thanks for sharing with us .....

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the awesome review and kind words, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from Spiritual Echo

Excellent

Shades of Igor coming to life. Though the picture is great and adds punch to the presentation, I think you've satisfied the condition of stand alone haiku.

It's clever and should do well. Thumbs up for me.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the awesome review and kind words, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from ellie6

Excellent

A very expressive poem, The illustration is particularly effective, it is truly alive. Your haiku tells, in a few words, the vast power of an electric storm.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the awesome review and kind words, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

Excellent entry for the haiku lightening prompt, mystery writer.

Great description of lightening, and the third line "it's alive" is a great aha moment.

Well done! Best wishes for the contest.

bichonfrisegirl

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the awesome review and kind words, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

Hi your writing matches the beautiful sparks of lighting. It sounds. It lights and it delights.
So few words but so much beauty and poetry.
Brilliant.
Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the awesome review and kind words, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from Cletus Hardiman

Excellent

As best as I can tell, you covered all the "rules of engagement" here. LOL This is a good piece of writing, and I find it hard to say so much on such a few words! LOL Thanks! Cletus Hardiman

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the awesome review and kind words, I really appreciate it. :)

reply by Cletus Hardiman on 22-Nov-2015

You are so welcome for my review...anytime! Cletus Hardiman.... AKA: Clete

Comment from fafa

Excellent

The short poem slides a truth into very trueform, insurance this thunderstorm did notkill us, it is a happiness to read yougreetings

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the awesome review and kind words, I really appreciate it. :)