Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello :)

Good job with the syllable count. The presentation is attractive and the words are well chosen. I know what is like to have a brain drain LOL no fun. Good luck.
Gypsy

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015

Hi Gypsy yes often suffer with brain drain and had it when I did this entry late at night after another busy day and then wonder why I am so darned tired LOL Cheers

Comment from Bellringer

Excellent

Your poem touches that happens in this fast paced world that celebrates multitasking. The word "again" works as a rhyme if pronounced with a long "a" sound (usually pronounced with a short "a"). Best wishes.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015

Thanks Bellringer for your review and comments and best wishes So glad you could see where I was coming from Cheers

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This one-six-one, In Over-drive, pretty much explains the state of modern living where everyone is given the capability of doing a dozen things at once and is asked to complete thirteen tasks. Nice poem.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015

yes you are not wrong Bill I wonder why we have let ourselves get so busy all the time it is often hard to do nothing. Appreciate your time and comments for my 1-6-1 Cheers

Comment from ericawrites

Excellent

This is a clever 1-6-1 and a worthy entry to the contest.

Complemented by the artwork.

Well done, best of luck in the voting.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015

Thanks so much ericawrites for your lovely review and best of luck wishes I had fun with this one but was actually in a brain drained state LOL Cheers

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

I love it. I am having a hard time with this. I thought it would be easy and it's been way harder than I thought, so my hat's off to you for this excellent work.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015

Thank you frogbook for your great feedback and glad you love my entry. sometimes the words just jump out and did write this after a very busy day and was quite tired but couldn't resist one last effort. So your comments really mean a lot Cheers

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Such fermentation of ideas! Such distillation! After all that bubbling and seething, you have delivered a few drops of 'the true, the blushful Hippocrene' enabling you to sink back into a 'drowsy numbness'. May you have sweet dreams of Members Cents tumbling into your coffers as a result of this draining poetic experience.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015

Thanks tfawcus for your very funny but grwat review I enjoyed reading your response and although after a good nights sleep must now continue with another busy day appreciate your time and comments Smiling Cheers Christine😀

Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

LOL, nice entry, the artwork is a brilliant representation of a brain in overdrive. It's a bit disturbing though to see the head opened by a can opener :O Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015

Hi John Thanks for your review and great comments I did this very late last night and I was literally in brain drain busy day and tired so I must go back and study the image to see what it really looks like LOL ..Always a bit of fun with these ones Cheers

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a solid entry for the contest
Nice linking of first and last words in brain drain
with an excellent second line to connect all three
Good rhyming of the three words
Excellent art work to go with your poem
Well done
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2015

Thank you very much rspoet for your great review and constructive comments for my fun entry. I was in Brain Drain when I saw this contest so couldn't resist putting my thoughts on paper . appreciate your good wishes too Cheers