A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "A Love So Dear"Assorted poems of love
35 total reviews
Comment from G.B. Smith
You closed the door on me in FB
I have missed you as well
The prostate cancer has spread. They are removing it on Dec 1st
Your poem is lovely
Bear
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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You closed the door on me in FB
I have missed you as well
The prostate cancer has spread. They are removing it on Dec 1st
Your poem is lovely
Bear
Comment Written 09-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2015
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I am sorry to hear that Bear.
Thanks for the review :)
Missy
Comment from JTStone
I love the new image on your page...
So, when last I read, you were peeking around corners and wondering. Now it sounds like you have actually made contact--and in a good way. Slowly your secret life is being revealed...
Beautiful poem girl.
JT
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2015
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I love the new image on your page...
So, when last I read, you were peeking around corners and wondering. Now it sounds like you have actually made contact--and in a good way. Slowly your secret life is being revealed...
Beautiful poem girl.
JT
Comment Written 08-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2015
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JT, my life is a mixture of disappointments and dreams. Thank you for this splendid review :)
Missy
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, this is so tender, so very lovely! Yes! "Cling to those who will wrap their arms around you Carry you home Whispering...I love you." What a wonderful tribute to someone very special, and what marvelous advice in that final stanza!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2015
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Oh, this is so tender, so very lovely! Yes! "Cling to those who will wrap their arms around you Carry you home Whispering...I love you." What a wonderful tribute to someone very special, and what marvelous advice in that final stanza!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2015
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Hi Sugga, thanks for the read and review :)
Missy
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You're very welcome. :)
Comment from l.raven
HI Missy, you are so right...words of love can make life worth living...wanting to live...true words of love can hold a relationship together a lifetime...very well written...and I love your picture...Luff Linda xxoo love
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2015
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HI Missy, you are so right...words of love can make life worth living...wanting to live...true words of love can hold a relationship together a lifetime...very well written...and I love your picture...Luff Linda xxoo love
Comment Written 08-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2015
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Luff you too, Linda! Thanks hon, for reading and reviewing when there was no reward :) You are the best!!
Missy
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HI Missy, you are so very welcome sweet girl...smiling big...you are the best as well...love ya xxoo
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello to my poet friend Missy
I truly enjoyed this romantically charged poem, filled with passion and love, embraced with hope and confidence in the relationship. Nice work, Loyd
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Hello to my poet friend Missy
I truly enjoyed this romantically charged poem, filled with passion and love, embraced with hope and confidence in the relationship. Nice work, Loyd
Comment Written 05-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Hello, my sweet poet friend, Loyd :)
I am just delighted to see your name here again. Thank you so much for the lovely review. I am so pleased you enjoyed it :)
Always,
Missy
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You are welcome and thank you again as well. Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.
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You are welcome and thank you again as well. Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.
Comment from mfowler
Good, strong emotional flow in this. It is sustained throughout. I thought the section up to the questions was extremely moving. The two lines where you use the question marks are essentially one long question, the second line qualifying the first. Suggest a comma at the end of the first and a question mark at the second. Try reading the second line on its own and you'll see it isn't a question.Your lines are tightly written and I like your formatting a lot. Good romantic poem.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Good, strong emotional flow in this. It is sustained throughout. I thought the section up to the questions was extremely moving. The two lines where you use the question marks are essentially one long question, the second line qualifying the first. Suggest a comma at the end of the first and a question mark at the second. Try reading the second line on its own and you'll see it isn't a question.Your lines are tightly written and I like your formatting a lot. Good romantic poem.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Mark, I have done as you suggested and added the comma instead of the question mark.
Thank you for this ever so soft and generous review. I truly hope you know how much I appreciate all your reviews. How they help me. :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from SFattempt
This is Beautifully written. Reading this just give me chills, as I keep picturing a situation and a time where I was in that place and loving someone deeply.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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This is Beautifully written. Reading this just give me chills, as I keep picturing a situation and a time where I was in that place and loving someone deeply.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015
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Oh, what a lovely thing to say to me, that I touched you so profoundly with my words. I can't thank you enough! You started my day off with a smile :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Leineco
Such beautiful words of love and gratitude -
acknowledgement of the importance of connecting, caring, guidance.
Whomever you had in mind when you wrote this should feel snuggled safely in your heart and mind :-)
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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Such beautiful words of love and gratitude -
acknowledgement of the importance of connecting, caring, guidance.
Whomever you had in mind when you wrote this should feel snuggled safely in your heart and mind :-)
Comment Written 04-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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I was inspired to write this after reading JumboJ's latest poem. If you haven't read it I encourage you to jump over there and read. He is truly inspiring :)
Thank you so much for leaving me this absolutely lovely review!
Missy
Comment from ravenblack
Beautiful poem, especially in that transition from the long couplet to the implied simple words- I love you. I am a horrible grammarian, but you do need a pause after "I know only this" I would break that line into its own stanza or " I know only this - words on a page, expressions of love/ from one human being to another-// here are those expressions. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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Beautiful poem, especially in that transition from the long couplet to the implied simple words- I love you. I am a horrible grammarian, but you do need a pause after "I know only this" I would break that line into its own stanza or " I know only this - words on a page, expressions of love/ from one human being to another-// here are those expressions. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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Thank you, for the suggestions and I will look at it. I grow with every review :)
Thank you also, for the lovely review as well RB.
Always,
Missy
Comment from Jay Squires
I wasn't aware I'd missed this. I'm sorry.
It's one of your very warm and heartfelt love poems you do so well.
I love your concluding lines:
When you have doubts
Cling to those who will
Wrap their arms around you
Carry you home.
Whispering ...I love you.
You cover all the bases. Invite me to the wedding.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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I wasn't aware I'd missed this. I'm sorry.
It's one of your very warm and heartfelt love poems you do so well.
I love your concluding lines:
When you have doubts
Cling to those who will
Wrap their arms around you
Carry you home.
Whispering ...I love you.
You cover all the bases. Invite me to the wedding.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2015
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No wedding sugga! I am delighted to see you found this and left this lovely review, even if I had to drag you here...lol.
Big hug xx
Missy