Red Roses for His Daughter
contest entry9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This five- seven- five about flowers, red roses for his daughter, has the eerie sense of the sweet and the bitter that were all represented with the same type of beautiful flowers.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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This five- seven- five about flowers, red roses for his daughter, has the eerie sense of the sweet and the bitter that were all represented with the same type of beautiful flowers.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Hi Bill. I truly appreciate your response to my 5-7-5. Thanks for sharing. Rod
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your nature poem about your favorite flower the red rose. Your poem is interesting. I like how you focused on the three stages of the daughters life and how she received red roses at each stage. Good alliteration of words an armful, beaming bride. Your artwork choice is beautiful.
Angel123
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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I enjoyed reading your nature poem about your favorite flower the red rose. Your poem is interesting. I like how you focused on the three stages of the daughters life and how she received red roses at each stage. Good alliteration of words an armful, beaming bride. Your artwork choice is beautiful.
Angel123
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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I am delighted you found my poem enjoyable and interesting. Thank you so much for sharing. Rod
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wow, this is a very sad 5/7/5 poem but very well written. You have perfect syllable count and the lines flow well together. Nice job!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Wow, this is a very sad 5/7/5 poem but very well written. You have perfect syllable count and the lines flow well together. Nice job!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Thank you, GBR, for your great response to my poem. Rod
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent flower 5-7-5 poem for the contest
or even outside the contest
Exact syllable count
The cycle of life
an emotional journey from joy to sorrow
Perfect picture to compliment the poem
Very well done
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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This is an excellent flower 5-7-5 poem for the contest
or even outside the contest
Exact syllable count
The cycle of life
an emotional journey from joy to sorrow
Perfect picture to compliment the poem
Very well done
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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I truly appreciate your wonderful response to specific aspects of my poem. Thank you so much for sharing. Rod
Comment from Jacob Collins
This is a sad, yet heartwarming piece at the same time. I liked the imagery of the red roses which I thought worked really well and you captured the emotion. I couldn't find any faults. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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This is a sad, yet heartwarming piece at the same time. I liked the imagery of the red roses which I thought worked really well and you captured the emotion. I couldn't find any faults. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thank you, Jacob, for your thoughtful feedback and praise.
Comment from Gone but not forgotten
Now I'm just sad. But the poem works. You completely aced the contest rules and gave the reader (at least me) a jolt. That's good writing. Congrats!
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Now I'm just sad. But the poem works. You completely aced the contest rules and gave the reader (at least me) a jolt. That's good writing. Congrats!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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I am sorry you are sad, but I truly appreciate your wonderful feedback. Thank you for sharing.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Well written poem, that should also be a good contest entry. Roses have such special meanings, from the cradle to the grave, as this poem so clearly depicts.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Well written poem, that should also be a good contest entry. Roses have such special meanings, from the cradle to the grave, as this poem so clearly depicts.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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I really like how you have summarize my theme. Thank you so much for sharing my poem.
Comment from Just2Write
It's hard to capture grief in such a short poem, but you do that here. My heart ached to read it. The rose, a perfect flower choice for almost any occasion, speaks volumes here. Well done.
Rose.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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It's hard to capture grief in such a short poem, but you do that here. My heart ached to read it. The rose, a perfect flower choice for almost any occasion, speaks volumes here. Well done.
Rose.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much for sharing my poem and for your very kind feedback.
Comment from Tessa Kay
Flowers can say so much and have a part in all stages of our lives.
I like how you go from birth to wedding to death. The flower remains the same.
Nice job. :)
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Flowers can say so much and have a part in all stages of our lives.
I like how you go from birth to wedding to death. The flower remains the same.
Nice job. :)
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Thank you, Tessa, for stopping by and sharing my poem.