Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Missy , this is just beautiful...you write beautiful love poems...some of my favorite writes...and I love your wording...very nicely said...and very nicely written...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2015

Smiling now Linda. Thanks for the super review. I hope to never disappoint you.

Always,
Missy

reply by l.raven on 12-Aug-2015

you never will Missy...and you are so very welcome sweet girl...Luff xxoo Linda

Comment from G.B. Smith

Excellent

Your voice is hypnotic
I love the poem and the artwork provides the breastplate for the poetic mind of the poet to come forth and enter into the thoughts of the reader. This is fantastic Missy
Bear

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015

Thank you Bear... You always make me feel like a poet that had something worthwhile to say :)

Missy

Comment from Green Lake Girl

Excellent

Good to hear your voice! A lovely love poem you've penned here. :D

Methinks you have a special someone in mind when you write these poems, Missy. I know I've hinted at that before, and you denied it. But .........!

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015

I write about desire and love because I desire it in my life. We all want and need love but I need and desire passion. So I speak of it here often :)

Thanks hon.

Missy

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

The touch of a loved on is very important and can make the worst days seem insugnificant. This is very well done.
Take care.
Christelle.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2015

Thanks Christelle :)

Always,
Missy

Comment from pbroussard209

Excellent

Great poem, I loved that you used your own voice it sounds so much nicer in your voice than mine. I have been told by more than a few people that my voice is very similar to Lisa Simpson. This was a beautiful poem, and I enjoyed reading and hearing it.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015

Oh hon, thank you for this wonderful review! I wish you had been an hour earlier and got the promo bucks.

Always,
Missy

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

A very sweet love poem - I think the best love poems are simple just like this one - not all mushy but true and real.

Teresa

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015

Thank you, Teresa, I am a simple woman who enjoys my life that way :) You delightful review of my work tells me I am on the right track.

Always,
Missy

Comment from scongrove

Exceptional

This is a wonderful poem Missy! I also like how you set this up. I didn't know we could have audio on our stuff. I learned something new! The photo was a perfect match for this. Super job! You have a way with words, that captivates different feelings, and brings on emotions we have all experienced.
Shana :)

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2015

I want to thank you for the lovely 6er Shana. :) I found the audio in the advanced editor setting. I did the read on my phone and uploaded...I went through some trial and error and wanted to throw some chit but finally got it to work...lol
I am so pleased that you enjoyed this and your compliment leaves me speechless my friend.

Always,
Missy

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

The touch of a caring hand should never be underestimated.
This poem makes me think of people who have nobody near them to do that. Some people grow old and remain all alone. It can be a harsh world.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015

Thanks for the empathetic review hon and I know you're right.
Always,
Missy

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Wow, makes everything well with just the touch of his hand, now, he much be some magical kind of man. But be careful telling all the girls about him as they might try to beat your time. Thanks for another enjoyable poem. :-)

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015

Thanks Ric... Where you able to hear me reading it?

Missy

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

These couplets tell of the strength of love. You use both full and slant end rhyme well.

I think the last line in the second couplet could be shorteened. Maybe,
'You open me up and we know it's not a plot'.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2015

Thanks DP, for the review and now I have to break out Google and search "full and slant end" rhyme. Always learning :)

Always,
Missy

reply by dragonpoet on 10-Aug-2015

You're welcome. It's always good to learn. I like learning new things.

dp