Comment from angelface2

Excellent

A great Haiku with 5/7/5 syllables. Many are feeling this right now, but only God knows how many of them are saved. I love this little poem, Carolyn. Thanks for sharing. :>D Miss Sally

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015

Thanks for this wonderful review, you are so right, and it does take more to go to heaven than dying at the hand of a terrorist. But I would like to think that those, especially who die for the cost of Christ would be in this manner.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

your words allow the reader to see and feel the act of terrorism to be quick

good visual to portray message
good enjambment to allow flow
good use "D" "L" consonance
good use "O" assonance
flows easy read

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2015

One would have to believe the eternal end is better than the temporary terror. Thank you so much Faye, Carolyn

reply by Smoothiecool on 11-Jan-2015

yes totally
most welcome to review....SC <>Faye (*:*)

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

Amen!
I have no more stars to give.
This is what I call a food for thought write...
meaning after you read it you go mm.
Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015

And thank you for reading and your comments misscookie, Love, Carolyn

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem that the author has created here. I am reading many posts of this nature over the past few days. It is good to see solidarity among people against these terrible terror attacks.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015

Yes it is good to see the common bond of intolerance for such acts. Thank you Tom for your fine comments. :-) Carolyn

reply by Tomes Johnston on 10-Jan-2015

It is good to see solidarity in the face of terror.

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Caroline, this is a great response mate to the challenge. I hope you are right that it is painless. I pray that this will stop and that is all we can do. God will win and so will we. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015

Yes God will win. I just pray those who are inclined to terrorize the world will be softened in some way and stop this terrible trend of hatred. Thank you Fez.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Carolyn,

Great response to Dawn's challenge. It's amazing how well chosen words can have such impact. Love the last line!

Well done.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015

Thanks dear lady,
Glad you liked this one.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Carolyn; mentally graphic, the imagery is very descriptive and expressive. Truly your imagination is very inventive and ingeniously creative. A vivid expression after terrorists does what they do in a drastic manner. Thank you for sharing and posting and may all your endeavors be graced by the Lord.
PS: I could see why you didn't need a picture for this poem.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015

Thanks Alex for your fine comments on this one.
I didn't even look for a picture as I felt the reader would immediately put themselves under the hood.
:-) Carolyn

reply by krys123 on 09-Jan-2015

You are so welcome Carolyn

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Carolyn, I have read quit a few of these...it is so sad that there are people out there that can do these kinds of killings...I will never understand it...I hate evil people...your poem is very well expressed...and very well written...Love ya Linda xxoo so good to see you...

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015

Hi there dear lady, I hope to never go through something like this but if I do, they can't claim my soul.. Love you, I usually promote my work so thanks for reviewing. I wrote another one also. Guess it got me 'worked up.' :-)
Love, Carolyn

reply by l.raven on 09-Jan-2015

I just reviewed it...I know what you are saying...it can get to a person...loveeeeeeeeeeeee xxoo