Comment from lakeport

Exceptional

Together, indeed that's a very beautiful and romantic expressed poem, very nice flow, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you, Hugs! lakeport.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014

Thanks E for this wonderful review and awesome stars. This one was such a pleasure to write. :-) Carolyn

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a lovely poem of faith that takes us through our lives as a couple. Together is a word I like in connection with marriage. My hubby and I cherished our time together and even more so as he became ill and was nearing his departure to Heaven. Blessings, patricia

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014

Thank you Patricia for this kind and affirming review of Together. I appreciate all you have said. :-) Carolyn

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Carolyn, we truly have to have faith in Him for Him to see us...I believe that...and with two our faith can withstand anything...I love your wording in this poem Carolyn... an beautiful picture...and very nicely written...Love Linda xxoo luff

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014

Thanks Linda for this sweet review and all those stars. I'm glad you liked Together. Love you too, Carolyn

reply by l.raven on 05-Dec-2014

you are always so welcome Carolyn...luff xxoo hugs you

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

It is good to be able to walk through life and to be able to share the joys and burdens with somebody close who cares. There is hope for unity again in Heaven.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014

Hi there, so glad you enjoyed this one Nicole. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

A perfect format for this with the repetition of "together" at the end of each stanza.

We are prepared to cross that threshold
into eternity
together

I wish I would pass with my husband, rather than live another ten years without him. But I do have faith that he'll be there to greet me on the other side. Forever together. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014

Thanks Shari, I am so glad you enjoyed the message in this one and appreciate your words. I understand your sentiments about your husband. Is he doing any better? :-) Carolyn

reply by Spitfire on 05-Dec-2014

Status quo, Carolyn. Status quo.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I love the words to your poem
You will never know how much they touched me yes morning.
For the past few days I thoughts were of my son. Which I'm shame to say it doesn't happen often
I told him our relationship will be much better when we meet in heaven.
Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014

Thank you misscookie for 'loving' this one. I am so blessed you enjoyed it and were touched by the words. I appreciate your fine comments.
:-) Carolyn

reply by misscookie on 05-Dec-2014

You're very welcome. have a blessed and safe weekend,
Cookie

reply by misscookie on 05-Dec-2014

You're very welcome. have a blessed week-end.
Until next time.

Cookie

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Very nice, Carolyn. Faith is really needed in a marriage and if you have it together, it makes everything else work. Nice job. :>D Miss Sally

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014

Thanks Miss Sally for the fine comments and understanding of this one. :-) Carolyn

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Carolyn; a very effective and wondrous way of effectively presenting togetherness with the sole understanding of peace and tranquility and a fortuitous of faith in one's heart. "Whenever storm clouds rise/We will weather the rain and wind/The challenges of daily life/Together". Such beautiful imagery that is so expressive in a very warm hearted feeling.
Thank you so much for sharing this with all of us and may all your endeavors be good ones.
Alex

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014

Thanks Alex, I so appreciate your fine comments and am happy you liked 'Together'.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Exceptional

A beautiful free verse faith poem. The repetition of together was quite powerful. An excellent contest entry, my friend. Best wishes. How do you like the new FS? It has me confused~Debbie

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014

Hi there Debbie, and thanks so much for this wonderful review and awesome stars. I just found this page if that tells you anything. LOL I have to get use to it. Love, Carolyn

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, Carolyn, great imagery presented about the faith that is easier to maintain when you have someone else making the journey with you. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014

What nice comments you have given for this one. I appreciate that you got the message so clearly. :-) Carolyn