Hunger of the Nightmare...
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Comment from trimple
OOERR!
This is certainly a spooky 5-7-5 poem.
Nice touch with
'midnight comes early' creepy!
good luck my friend with the competition
Unfortunately when we enter these competitions, our fans are not pm'd.
Glad I popped by, as this is a cracking poem
kind regards
trimple:)
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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OOERR!
This is certainly a spooky 5-7-5 poem.
Nice touch with
'midnight comes early' creepy!
good luck my friend with the competition
Unfortunately when we enter these competitions, our fans are not pm'd.
Glad I popped by, as this is a cracking poem
kind regards
trimple:)
Comment Written 09-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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Thank you so very much triple. You're always so kind to me...
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Hey Honey
Long time no hear!
Do pop by sometime.
lotsa love
trimps:)
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I LOVED your 5-7-5. It was perfect.
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Aye, they were both pretty good :)
much love
tracey
Comment from IndianaIrish
I voted for this contest entry because I really thought it was the best. I'm sorry it didn't win! I really liked the eerie, frightening feel of your poem, Greg, and the nightmares that find their way into our dreams more than just for Halloween.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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I voted for this contest entry because I really thought it was the best. I'm sorry it didn't win! I really liked the eerie, frightening feel of your poem, Greg, and the nightmares that find their way into our dreams more than just for Halloween.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
Comment Written 24-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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You're the best. Thank you. I've been away for a bit but I'm comin back! :). Miss ya
Comment from kiwisteveh
Good entry for the Halloween 5-7-5 contest.
The first line sets up the horror, the second suggests its bloodthirsty nature and the third brings it to a terrifying conclusion...
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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Good entry for the Halloween 5-7-5 contest.
The first line sets up the horror, the second suggests its bloodthirsty nature and the third brings it to a terrifying conclusion...
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 24-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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Thank you again Steve. I'm sorry I've been away, hence the late reply! :)
Comment from Wendyanne
ooh scary! I like your little Halloween poem (without mentioning Halloween) lol. The idea of nightmares coming to life is frightening, eek.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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ooh scary! I like your little Halloween poem (without mentioning Halloween) lol. The idea of nightmares coming to life is frightening, eek.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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Thank you so very much. I'm sorry for the late thank you!
Comment from RodG
I like this non-traditional approach to the prompt. I do think many of us harbor "nightmares" when we think of what could happen on that night, especially after midnight.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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I like this non-traditional approach to the prompt. I do think many of us harbor "nightmares" when we think of what could happen on that night, especially after midnight.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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Thank you so very much. I'm sorry for the late thank you!
Comment from drivenbackward
Another creepy poem, mystery writer. I like the "Midnight wakes early". I don't think I've ever heard of that phrase before. Solid ending as well.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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Another creepy poem, mystery writer. I like the "Midnight wakes early". I don't think I've ever heard of that phrase before. Solid ending as well.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
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Thank you so very much. I'm sorry for the late thank you!