The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Butterflies and Bluebirds"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
35 total reviews
Comment from Rosalyne
Hi, Carolyn.
This is such a beautiful poem and lovely tribute to Pam. I'm sorry I never got to know her, but from your words, she must have been a very special lady. I'm so sorry for your loss. Your note at the bottom highlights the beauty of your poem.
Bye
Rosalyne :)
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014
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Hi, Carolyn.
This is such a beautiful poem and lovely tribute to Pam. I'm sorry I never got to know her, but from your words, she must have been a very special lady. I'm so sorry for your loss. Your note at the bottom highlights the beauty of your poem.
Bye
Rosalyne :)
Comment Written 29-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2014
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Thank you Rosalyne
Comment from Jackarrie
a really lovely tribute to Pam, I am sure she must know how we all feel about her passing. She was just brilliant, and will be sadly missed.
Well written
Mary
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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a really lovely tribute to Pam, I am sure she must know how we all feel about her passing. She was just brilliant, and will be sadly missed.
Well written
Mary
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Thank you Mary
Comment from JudyS
I didn't know Gungalo, I feel sad about that. This is a wonderful tribute to her. I don't write poetry but I like reading it. Excellent job on this. Judy
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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I didn't know Gungalo, I feel sad about that. This is a wonderful tribute to her. I don't write poetry but I like reading it. Excellent job on this. Judy
Comment Written 27-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Thank you Judy
Comment from Irish Rain
One with so much love in her, for nature, and everyone here, had to have been our gift from God. I love your touching tribute, and I know she does too...Blessings tonight, Judy
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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One with so much love in her, for nature, and everyone here, had to have been our gift from God. I love your touching tribute, and I know she does too...Blessings tonight, Judy
Comment Written 27-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Thank you Judy
Comment from jmdg1954
Carolyn, those are beautiful words written from you heart for Pam. She was a superb written and greater human being. She will be missed.
She is in better hands now. No more suffering. Very nicely done. John
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Carolyn, those are beautiful words written from you heart for Pam. She was a superb written and greater human being. She will be missed.
She is in better hands now. No more suffering. Very nicely done. John
Comment Written 27-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Thank you John
Love, Carolyn
Comment from Acquired Taste
Warm, emotional tribute to Pam. The photo seems as though it is part of the tunnel we might travel to sit with the Savior.
Butterflies and Bluebirds is a lovely visual to this heartwarming tribute. With so many truly lovely words about Pam, I can only image her smiling down on all. AT=/
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Warm, emotional tribute to Pam. The photo seems as though it is part of the tunnel we might travel to sit with the Savior.
Butterflies and Bluebirds is a lovely visual to this heartwarming tribute. With so many truly lovely words about Pam, I can only image her smiling down on all. AT=/
Comment Written 27-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Thank you AT
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose for your poem
it is a perfect match. your words are filled with so much warmth and love
It brought tears to my eyes not of sadness only joy to know your friend is
ay a peaceful place.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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I love the artwork you choose for your poem
it is a perfect match. your words are filled with so much warmth and love
It brought tears to my eyes not of sadness only joy to know your friend is
ay a peaceful place.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Thank you Miss Cookie
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You're very welcome. Have a safe and nice 4th.
until next time.
Cookie
Comment from Bina1
What a lovely poem you wrote for such a fine poet. She was a kind and generous spirit. I will really miss her and her beautiful, passionate poems.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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What a lovely poem you wrote for such a fine poet. She was a kind and generous spirit. I will really miss her and her beautiful, passionate poems.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much
Comment from adewpearl
solid use of abcb rhyming
excellent use of enjambment to keep thoughts flowing from line to line
good alliteration in soul is soaring
and in bluebirds and butterflies
a thoughtful message conveyed through a lovely extended simile :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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solid use of abcb rhyming
excellent use of enjambment to keep thoughts flowing from line to line
good alliteration in soul is soaring
and in bluebirds and butterflies
a thoughtful message conveyed through a lovely extended simile :-) Brooke
Comment Written 27-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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Thank you Brooke
Comment from ann marie mazz
hello carolyn
what a most beautiful and soothing tribute
your words could not be more elegant
I'm certain she can see and hear your words
her passing is truly a great loss
thank you for sharing
thank you for remembering
ann marie
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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hello carolyn
what a most beautiful and soothing tribute
your words could not be more elegant
I'm certain she can see and hear your words
her passing is truly a great loss
thank you for sharing
thank you for remembering
ann marie
Comment Written 27-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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And thank you ann marie