Comment from MoonWillow

Good

This is a beautiful entry, Anon. But may I as which words are your internal rhyme? The rules call for an internal rhyme and end rhyme. :)MW

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014

Thank you

reply by MoonWillow on 27-Apr-2014

You can fix it anytime. That's what Tom told me when I ask him the same thing a while back. He said if it's a prompt entry, that it can be edited anytime. If you are able to edit it, I will change the rating. Let me know. :)shawn

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014

Hi

Thank you for your reply. I have changed a couple of words.

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

A heavenly white dove
so gently foretells love.

This is the perfect essence poem with the internal rhyme. The image of the dove is beautiful.

good luck in the contest. Mary

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014

Thank you

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

a small poem with a big meaning...white doves do the symbol the true feelings of love...I love your poem and the picture is perfect...

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014

Thank you

reply by l.raven on 27-Apr-2014

your so welcome..

Comment from MagKing

Excellent

A heavenly white dove
Gently foretells true love.

A fine contest entry.
Yet I still think it's lacking some of the requirement of the contest.
The contest states that it makes an internal rhyme in between and still make an end rhyme. But yours is not so.
It only succeeded in making end rhymes.
I suggest you see to it, if you want to win the contest.

MagKing


Yes! This makes much sense and abides very much with the contest rules....With this you won't be easily discarded.
No offense

MagKing

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014

Thank you

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014

Hi
Thank you for your review once again. I have changed my poem, hopefully it suits this time.