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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Senryu(on the wedding night)"Senryu Collection
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Comment from Selina Stambi
Namaste and Vannakkam, Anupam!
That poor bride ....:)
Wildly funny - no pun intended either!
Best wishes in the contest, my young friend. :)
Sonali
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Namaste and Vannakkam, Anupam!
That poor bride ....:)
Wildly funny - no pun intended either!
Best wishes in the contest, my young friend. :)
Sonali
Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Thank you for this lovely review. :)
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a great senryu for the writing prompt with just the right amount of witty humor:) Good luck to you in the contest.
Teresa
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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This is a great senryu for the writing prompt with just the right amount of witty humor:) Good luck to you in the contest.
Teresa
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Thank you for this lovely review.
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
you have the three lines and the correct syllable count
your few words allow the reader to see and feel that the wedding night went wide images portrayed well
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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good luck in the contest
you have the three lines and the correct syllable count
your few words allow the reader to see and feel that the wedding night went wide images portrayed well
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Thank you for this lovely review.
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welcome..SC
Comment from James Dooney
Well the dude has probably been saving up for it !!! Got to let it roll free at some point yeh ! Good work here. So few lines, so strong message !
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Well the dude has probably been saving up for it !!! Got to let it roll free at some point yeh ! Good work here. So few lines, so strong message !
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Thank you for this lovely review.
Comment from in777wr#
This was a very humorous poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. The poem does meet the contest requirement. Overall, very humorous. Nice job.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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This was a very humorous poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. The poem does meet the contest requirement. Overall, very humorous. Nice job.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Thank you for this lovely review.
Comment from buzclick
on the wedding night
his wildness almost killed her
pun not intended
If it hadn't she would have been upset. :)
Good read and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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on the wedding night
his wildness almost killed her
pun not intended
If it hadn't she would have been upset. :)
Good read and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Thank you for this lovely review.
Comment from lancellot
Well I can I see the humor of it, but I think he probably gave himself a little too much credit. Your syllable count was spot on.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Well I can I see the humor of it, but I think he probably gave himself a little too much credit. Your syllable count was spot on.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Thank you for this lovely review.