Who Knew?
What happens when you least believe28 total reviews
Comment from darla1977
This is just wonderful! You have great rhyming abilities! Very cute, I loved reading this! The last line is my favorite! Such talent! Way to go!
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This is just wonderful! You have great rhyming abilities! Very cute, I loved reading this! The last line is my favorite! Such talent! Way to go!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2014
Comment from zanya
Wow the process of our lives well conveyed here in beautiful imagery from 'fuzzy ten-pound bear' to 'china, lace and white'.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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Wow the process of our lives well conveyed here in beautiful imagery from 'fuzzy ten-pound bear' to 'china, lace and white'.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the sweet comments, Zanya. Seems like yesterday!
Comment from dmt1967
This poem took me back to my own child each year she was into something different great job good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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This poem took me back to my own child each year she was into something different great job good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 14-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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Thank you for writing...oh the memories..
Comment from Visheshta Dahiya
WOW..!!! beautiful imagination about the certain and unchangeable rule of nature. i love it. it put a smile on my face. the things which one uses in particular ages are perfectly described. this one is seriously just too good.
a great poem
best wishes for the contest
Visheshta
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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WOW..!!! beautiful imagination about the certain and unchangeable rule of nature. i love it. it put a smile on my face. the things which one uses in particular ages are perfectly described. this one is seriously just too good.
a great poem
best wishes for the contest
Visheshta
Comment Written 14-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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Hi there, this one was fun because this was my daughter...(I skipped her black period, ha) blessings....and thanks for the nice comments!
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WELCOME :)
Comment from flora loucheur
They sure do! Nice to see the changes didn't include black punk everything. Ha! I liked the line 'when privy to your lair'. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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They sure do! Nice to see the changes didn't include black punk everything. Ha! I liked the line 'when privy to your lair'. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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Thank you sincerely...and she did have the black stage....my heart wasn't up to including it..;0 )
Comment from tfawcus
They do grow up fast! ...and in the meantime, almost imperceptibly, we grow old. In our eyes, though, they will always remain as children! Children whose tastes may have changed, but still children, nevertheless! And so they will remain until we are gone.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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They do grow up fast! ...and in the meantime, almost imperceptibly, we grow old. In our eyes, though, they will always remain as children! Children whose tastes may have changed, but still children, nevertheless! And so they will remain until we are gone.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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So very very true! Thank you for your nice comments and your words of wisdom!:0)
Comment from Clancy25
This poem reminds me of my daughter and how fast she grew up,although her color was purple. Your words are simple and direct and hold so much meaning of how fast our children grow up right before our eyes. Oh yeah, we want those years, and more. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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This poem reminds me of my daughter and how fast she grew up,although her color was purple. Your words are simple and direct and hold so much meaning of how fast our children grow up right before our eyes. Oh yeah, we want those years, and more. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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Thank YOU for your kindness in writing.Take care, Clancy...(love your name)
Comment from Charlene0513
A poem that depicts our change of tastes as we age and the sometimes ordinary things become mundane and the finer things in life (may) tend to their likings.
Charlene
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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A poem that depicts our change of tastes as we age and the sometimes ordinary things become mundane and the finer things in life (may) tend to their likings.
Charlene
Comment Written 13-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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You sound like a girl who "knows". Ha. Thank you so much for your comments!
Comment from nancyjam
As a mom, I can relate to the changes
a growing girl can make and how she
sees herself, reflects in her room decor.
Nice visuals, rhyme and meter.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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As a mom, I can relate to the changes
a growing girl can make and how she
sees herself, reflects in her room decor.
Nice visuals, rhyme and meter.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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Watching them grow up, and seeing them change before us...is such a gift. Blessings, Lo
Comment from in777wr#
This was a very well written poem. The message is clear, and one that can be related with easily. The poem flows, and reads well. The last line sums this poem up well. Nice job.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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This was a very well written poem. The message is clear, and one that can be related with easily. The poem flows, and reads well. The last line sums this poem up well. Nice job.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much. Doesn't it make you feel good when someone
Relates to you or your words? That's what you did for me.