Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Carolyn, the creative use of the initial embedded rhyme and the following a-a-a-a-a rhyme makes the write flow naturally. The marks represent the pauses in thought and time as the reader reads through to the end. Nicely presented. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014

Thanks GracieAnn , I am delighted you enjoyed Lost in you. Your review is appreciated as it affirms the quality. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

God morning Carolyn, how are you?
Deep nostalgic and sincere, Ithink this writing and its fashionable mode make this cute little poem very interesting.
I love its stp like descent.
Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014

I enjoy being creative and it just seemed the thing to do LOL. Thanks for the great review. Have a wonderful week, :-) Carolyn

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Beautifully apt, from words, to chosen artwork, made me remember what that is like, just to dream away! Blessings to you tonight!

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014

And blessings back to you with many thanks for this great review. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Petriesan

Excellent

Lost in you, adrift in time. . .good closing to this piece, which reads very smoothly and is sort of dreamy.

Nicely done

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014

I appreciate the comments and that you liked Lost in you,
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Sarah Butterfly

Excellent

I like the structure of this poem Carolyn. One can just hear the girl thinking the thoughts you wrote down. Well written.

Kind regards

Sarah

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014

Sarah, what an awesome review. Thank you :-) Carolyn

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Carolyn... The expressions you penned in this poem are so heartfelt that it must be you reiterating those words! I liked the format in which you presented them. I had a drifting feel to it all.

Nicely done once again... John

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014

Thanks John, you know I am in love with my hubby, so this was not to difficult to write. Glad you enjoyed Lost in you. :-) Carolyn

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Head over heels in love thoughts only for the one she loves, contemplating being together for ever and a day, she seems to look his way

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014

What a sweet review, I love your comments about Lost in you. :-) Carolyn

reply by country ranch writer on 01-Feb-2014

welcome

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Carolyn this shares the woman in love well. A creative and unique way of penning this one visually. I thought you did a good job on it my friend.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014

Thanks so much Maureen, you know I don't write much lovey-dovey but I do like variety. LOL This poem actually expresses how I still feel about my husband of many years. Hope you are doing well my dear friend. Love, :-) Carolyn

Comment from mickbey

Excellent

This poem has a breezy quality to it, pleasing expressions, the page layout added to the effect, good spacing, leaves a lot of room 'between the lines,' and that last line ends it perfectly, enjoyable read.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014

Thanks mickbey for a wonderful review of Lost in you. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

Excellent love poem. Beautifully written. I love your free verse format and the lovely picture chosen to enhance the poem. I enjoyed it very much.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014

Thank you for this great review, I am delighted you enjoyed Lost in you. :-) Carolyn