The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Good Morning Glory"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This five - seven - five is about those ever-popular morning glories that seem to climb from the most remote places to brighten up even the most drab area that they seem to position themselves.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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This five - seven - five is about those ever-popular morning glories that seem to climb from the most remote places to brighten up even the most drab area that they seem to position themselves.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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I love them and you are so right, they climb into the most dismal places and brighten u p the spot. Thank you Bill for this wonderful review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Fandoodle
Blue glory resembles blue geraniums that smile praises it's true. Thanks for sharing your little flowery poem and entering the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Blue glory resembles blue geraniums that smile praises it's true. Thanks for sharing your little flowery poem and entering the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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I am glad you enjoyed Good Morning Glory. Contest are fun and prompt me to write to a subject, I rarely ever win LOL :-) Carolyn
Comment from mfowler
This is an inspired choice of flower for this 5-7-5 poem. You've made it in praise of God: Smiles praise to Maker
Suggested the plants deliberate movement towards Heaven:Entwined vines of splendor rise
... and personalised it with the flower's greeting:Good Morning Glory
Great artwork and presentation complete a great read. I'm going out to look at my Morning Glory now.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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This is an inspired choice of flower for this 5-7-5 poem. You've made it in praise of God: Smiles praise to Maker
Suggested the plants deliberate movement towards Heaven:Entwined vines of splendor rise
... and personalised it with the flower's greeting:Good Morning Glory
Great artwork and presentation complete a great read. I'm going out to look at my Morning Glory now.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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You must live in a far warmer climate than I do, my Morning Glory won't be out for months. I so enjoyed your review, thank you for taking the time. :-)
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Tis one hundred and twenty two degrees outside today. That's hot, even for Adelaide.
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It is about 10 degrees here tonight. , 122 is definitely a hot climate. I'm not familiar with Adelaide but I will look it up to see where you are :-). Stay cool if you can. :-) Carolyn
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Adelaide Australia, I love your country, and have several FS friends there. I am happy to know you.
Comment from l.raven
a great way to start your poem off...these I put in my yard of all colors...they are beautiful...I love your poem and a beautiful picture ...very well written
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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a great way to start your poem off...these I put in my yard of all colors...they are beautiful...I love your poem and a beautiful picture ...very well written
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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I love them too, thank you for this lovely review.
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you are so welcome...xxoo
Comment from MarjorieAnne
Compliments for great choice of flower, good use of alliteration and assonance, nice pun in first line, and connection with praising the Creator in last. It would read smoother this way: Good Morning Glories' / Entwined vines of splendor rise / Smiling Maker's praise".
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Compliments for great choice of flower, good use of alliteration and assonance, nice pun in first line, and connection with praising the Creator in last. It would read smoother this way: Good Morning Glories' / Entwined vines of splendor rise / Smiling Maker's praise".
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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You may be right about that, I will take a look at pluralizing the write.
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
You nailed the easy part, the syllable count, but reads like three separate story titles. I think you wrote to the picture; and you're depending on the picture to make a connection.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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You nailed the easy part, the syllable count, but reads like three separate story titles. I think you wrote to the picture; and you're depending on the picture to make a connection.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Thank you for your time and comments. I appreciate you,
Comment from Cycler
This is a lovely 5-7-5 flower. Beautiful picture and your words praise its beauty as well as the glory of another day granted by the Maker.
Very lovely!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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This is a lovely 5-7-5 flower. Beautiful picture and your words praise its beauty as well as the glory of another day granted by the Maker.
Very lovely!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Thank you garcon for this wonderful review and that you got the essence of the poem. :-)
Comment from MoonWillow
I love morning glories. I had a whole trellis full until we moved the dog into the back yard. LOL. Very nicely done, Anon, and I thank you for joining the prompt. Only two things I need to remind you of...no author's notes please, just for this prompt. And in your description line, "Contest Entry" only. Other than that, very nice work...beautiful artwork, and expertly worded. Good luck to you!! :)MW
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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I love morning glories. I had a whole trellis full until we moved the dog into the back yard. LOL. Very nicely done, Anon, and I thank you for joining the prompt. Only two things I need to remind you of...no author's notes please, just for this prompt. And in your description line, "Contest Entry" only. Other than that, very nice work...beautiful artwork, and expertly worded. Good luck to you!! :)MW
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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I will fix that.. thank you so much, glad you enjoyed the poem.
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You're welcome, and thank YOU! :)
Comment from Mark Valentine
The poem is as good as the picture and the picture is awesome! The idea of a morning glory as a prayer is not unique, but your articulation of that sentiment is heartfely=t and profound. Thanks
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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The poem is as good as the picture and the picture is awesome! The idea of a morning glory as a prayer is not unique, but your articulation of that sentiment is heartfely=t and profound. Thanks
Comment Written 31-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Thank you Mark. for this great review and rating. :-)