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Hurt feelings (a senryu)

Words may hurt but sometimes there is an underlying truth.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Lylise
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This is a strong entry into the Senryu Poem writing prompt. It is well written and this presentation is great. Contest requirements fulfilled in spades. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2014
    Thank you for your great review.
Comment from Delores J. Howard
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It takes a very mature person to arise from the ashes of "truth" and to become better for it, (though it burned like "you know what" while going through it). Loved your insight.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2014
    Your positive review has given me a boost. Thank you.
Comment from jmdg1954
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hurtful comment made
hours of rumination
discovered home truth

The syllable count, 5-7-5 is spot on and all senryu requirements seem fulfilled. Nicely done. John

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2014
    Thank you John. Your affirmation is encouraging.
Comment from 24chas
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This was an enjoyable read. I liked the thought process in this one. It had a definite beginning, middle, and end. Good job.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2014
    Thank you for your much appreciated comments and 5 stars.