senryu( conclusive evidence)
Love blossomed then died.6 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
I could have sworn I reviewed this senryu already - in fact, I AM sure I read it because it made such an impression on me. (Maybe I was interrupted before I wrote the review and forgot by the time I can back to FS.)
Anyway, senryu doesn't get any better, in my opinion. Sad, though...
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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I could have sworn I reviewed this senryu already - in fact, I AM sure I read it because it made such an impression on me. (Maybe I was interrupted before I wrote the review and forgot by the time I can back to FS.)
Anyway, senryu doesn't get any better, in my opinion. Sad, though...
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Thanks for stopping by, Dawn. Glad you liked it. I am a big fan of short forms.
Comment from rouskin
end of marriage marked
by dead bouquet of roses
set out for the trash
Very wise words and perfect artwork
Strong contestant probably the winner.
Best of luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2014
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end of marriage marked
by dead bouquet of roses
set out for the trash
Very wise words and perfect artwork
Strong contestant probably the winner.
Best of luck in your contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Lylise
This is a strong entry into the Senryu Poem writing prompt. It is well written and this presentation is great. Contest requirements fulfilled in spades. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2014
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This is a strong entry into the Senryu Poem writing prompt. It is well written and this presentation is great. Contest requirements fulfilled in spades. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2014
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Thanks for the review and good luck wishes.
Comment from Delores J. Howard
Nothing is more beautiful than a rose. Alas, a rose will not last forever. We go into a beautiful marriage filled with love and hope, thinking that it will forever, too, but alas, so many do not. Loved your piece. Don't quite get the analogy here. Hopefully, the marriage lasted longer than the dozen roses did. I loved the musical accompaniment. Thank you!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2014
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Nothing is more beautiful than a rose. Alas, a rose will not last forever. We go into a beautiful marriage filled with love and hope, thinking that it will forever, too, but alas, so many do not. Loved your piece. Don't quite get the analogy here. Hopefully, the marriage lasted longer than the dozen roses did. I loved the musical accompaniment. Thank you!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2014
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Thank you for reviewing. The dead roses are a metaphor for the end of the marriage...tossed to the curb
Comment from rjuselius
"end of marriage marked
by dead bouquet of roses
set out for the trash"
apparently they dried the flowers and kept keepsake until the marriage was over.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2014
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"end of marriage marked
by dead bouquet of roses
set out for the trash"
apparently they dried the flowers and kept keepsake until the marriage was over.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 20-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2014
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from 24chas
You really captured a lot of emotion in this short piece. It takes a good amount of skill to do that, and you succeeded. Nice job.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2014
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You really captured a lot of emotion in this short piece. It takes a good amount of skill to do that, and you succeeded. Nice job.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2014
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thank you or the kind review.