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Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "How Can I Sing It?"Song lyrics with music attached
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Comment from TAB_that's me
Oh my the words were beautiful but the singing really brought it alive. Very touching and you have a great voice, Mikey:)
Teresa
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Oh my the words were beautiful but the singing really brought it alive. Very touching and you have a great voice, Mikey:)
Teresa
Comment Written 12-Jun-2017
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Michael,
Wow... you have a beautiful voice ... very melodic and romantic... it has a fifties love ballad sound. The lyrics are just as beautiful. What was your bands' name?
I really like it, it has heart.
Gypsy hugs, sweetie pie
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
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Hello, Michael,
Wow... you have a beautiful voice ... very melodic and romantic... it has a fifties love ballad sound. The lyrics are just as beautiful. What was your bands' name?
I really like it, it has heart.
Gypsy hugs, sweetie pie
Comment Written 11-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
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Awww. You are tooooo sweet. I'm so pleased you liked it. It's just me without any adornments. Where's an auto-tuner when you need one? Hugs back, mike
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I loved it. I am so sorry I missed this the first time around. I have been post that on a revived post sixes don't count, but I'm giving you one anyway. I really enjoyed this.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
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I loved it. I am so sorry I missed this the first time around. I have been post that on a revived post sixes don't count, but I'm giving you one anyway. I really enjoyed this.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017
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Hi, Barbara
You are just way too sweet. Thank you so much. Sixes count to me especially from one of the sites very best authors. I'm honored and thrilled. So delighted you enjoyed. mike
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Very well-written song lyrics. Great performance. It really is words straight from the heart. Dreams and wishes can only come true when we do something about it to make it happen.
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Very well-written song lyrics. Great performance. It really is words straight from the heart. Dreams and wishes can only come true when we do something about it to make it happen.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2017
Comment from c_lucas
Relationships can form in various situations. This is very well written focusing on a question with no answer. The is a strange setting of words and left the reader pondering.
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Relationships can form in various situations. This is very well written focusing on a question with no answer. The is a strange setting of words and left the reader pondering.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2017
Comment from donforclearn
Thank you for expressing what usually cannot be said. It is hard to truly reveal certain feelings. The author takes the mixed imagery and makes the reader really think. The poem also conveys a sense of peace with how the reader states their feeling. Basically, how the reader does it is alright. Thanks again.
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Thank you for expressing what usually cannot be said. It is hard to truly reveal certain feelings. The author takes the mixed imagery and makes the reader really think. The poem also conveys a sense of peace with how the reader states their feeling. Basically, how the reader does it is alright. Thanks again.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2017
Comment from DR DIP
Great song Michael its amazing how lyrics can come alive with a tune nice voice but the instrument is a bit over bearing of your words. Still i really liked it thanks for sharing.
dip
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Great song Michael its amazing how lyrics can come alive with a tune nice voice but the instrument is a bit over bearing of your words. Still i really liked it thanks for sharing.
dip
Comment Written 11-Jun-2017
Comment from Cookie333
Simple really, very well done Mike! You have captured the essence of any new feelings/uncertainty of this emotion. I have no doubt you can still hit the notes my friend...practice makes perfect,
thanks Mike
karen
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Simple really, very well done Mike! You have captured the essence of any new feelings/uncertainty of this emotion. I have no doubt you can still hit the notes my friend...practice makes perfect,
thanks Mike
karen
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Practice. Ha! Very hard to get me to practice. This site has got me working more than I ever have. Slave drivers. Nonets, sonnets, rhyme meter....brother! What happened to blathering incessantly? Glad you liked this. Kind of a pretty little song. mikey
Comment from ravenblack
Decades? Don't be too hard on yourself. It is not ever easy to let someone in enough to see "..where I hide trembling". If once in awhile you can, that is pretty damn good.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Decades? Don't be too hard on yourself. It is not ever easy to let someone in enough to see "..where I hide trembling". If once in awhile you can, that is pretty damn good.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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I really did write this decades ago. hahaha. God, that sounds awful. I am usually trembling around girls. Once the crowd leaves and the stage is gone, I am like a twelve year old. That has some charm though! mikey
Comment from allborn66
This is a beautiful piece. I love the word choice. It inspires strong emotions. The work has a nice flow. You communicate the theme well.
Barbara
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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This is a beautiful piece. I love the word choice. It inspires strong emotions. The work has a nice flow. You communicate the theme well.
Barbara
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Delighted to hear these nice compliments. This is one of my songs from back in the day. I am so happy you enjoyed it. thank you kindly, mikey