One Door Leads to Another
Many hesitate to open the door to faith in Christ4 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
good use of rhyming couplets including proximate rhymes like open/coping
good alliteration in dreary days
a beautifully thoughtful spiritual poem with a reassuring message and tone :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
good use of rhyming couplets including proximate rhymes like open/coping
good alliteration in dreary days
a beautifully thoughtful spiritual poem with a reassuring message and tone :-) Brooke
Comment Written 26-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thanks Brooke. Your kind words are appreciated. Dennis
Comment from bard owl
A very unique and interesting read. While reading it, I kept thinking of that final door into eternity. I do love a happy ending. What could be happier than coming home to Christ?
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
A very unique and interesting read. While reading it, I kept thinking of that final door into eternity. I do love a happy ending. What could be happier than coming home to Christ?
Comment Written 22-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013
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Amen! Thanks!
Comment from Sueellen11
Excellent message within your poem yes one of my favourite passages in the bible, beautifully written I enjoyed reading, let our Lord into our hearts he is the great Shepard well done blessings sueellen
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
Excellent message within your poem yes one of my favourite passages in the bible, beautifully written I enjoyed reading, let our Lord into our hearts he is the great Shepard well done blessings sueellen
Comment Written 21-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Amen, Sueellen. Thank you.
Comment from denhagan
This was a nice inspirational poem, written in quatrain form, with great rhythm and some rhyming. A nice poem appropriate for the Behind the Door contest.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
This was a nice inspirational poem, written in quatrain form, with great rhythm and some rhyming. A nice poem appropriate for the Behind the Door contest.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you very much, your comments are appreciated.
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You're welcome