A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "~The Zombie King~"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
70 total reviews
Comment from mumanoon
Wow...One word amazing. I really enjoyed reading this and the layout, graphics etc. framed the piece to perfection. I will definitely be reading a lot of your writing...You have a fan! Regards, E
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Wow...One word amazing. I really enjoyed reading this and the layout, graphics etc. framed the piece to perfection. I will definitely be reading a lot of your writing...You have a fan! Regards, E
Comment Written 01-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2013
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Thanks very much for those wonderful compliments, mumanoon. I will take all of the fans that I can get, LOL! If you enjoyed this one, there's certainly more to come, I promise you!
Thanks so much, again.
Comment from allborn66
This is an interesting poem. I like your format on the picture - I'm sure it was quite challenging. It has a good flow to it. The rhyming scheme is nice. The Author's notes are informative.
Barbara
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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This is an interesting poem. I like your format on the picture - I'm sure it was quite challenging. It has a good flow to it. The rhyming scheme is nice. The Author's notes are informative.
Barbara
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thanks, Barbara...I appreciate your gracious review.
Comment from G.B. Smith
I love that old music. It is played into mu bedroom at night, by elves. OH all right it was my evil sister. We loved the macabre and off the wall stuff. Well done and thought out
Beast wishes
Bear
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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I love that old music. It is played into mu bedroom at night, by elves. OH all right it was my evil sister. We loved the macabre and off the wall stuff. Well done and thought out
Beast wishes
Bear
Comment Written 29-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
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Thanks very much, Bear. I appreciate that!
Comment from w.j.debi
Another haunting read that sends chills down the spin. Another character I'm glad to meet in my imagination only and not in person. Great artwork for your pictapoem.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Another haunting read that sends chills down the spin. Another character I'm glad to meet in my imagination only and not in person. Great artwork for your pictapoem.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thanks very much w.j. debi. I sure appreciate that!
Comment from Gungalo
Dean this layout is horrible. LOL can't you do something about the way it appears on the page? It's such a good story but I waited to see if you would repair it. I don't mind being the refreshments. LOL
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Dean this layout is horrible. LOL can't you do something about the way it appears on the page? It's such a good story but I waited to see if you would repair it. I don't mind being the refreshments. LOL
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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I will try, G., thanks. Is it the font? What is specifically causing your viewing problems, I will try to correct them...
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It takes up the whole page and runs right over the existing stuff that is there.
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Really? You are the first one to tell me that. Odd...I would think others would let me know that as well. I will try to change it. When I view it on my computer, it looks just fine, nothing overruns anything. I will see what I can do, I promise.
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Maybe they are just not going to tell you. LOL
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I made some changes, see if it comes across any better. I would nope everyone would be honest, as you were. Geesh, I won't bite...too hard, heh heh...
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"hope" everyone would be as honest. There goes my stupid wayward trigger finger again...
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It's better now Dean.
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Thanks for your help, Gungalo!
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LOL so what Dean. Hehehe.
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No problem Dean.
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
This is one of my favorite so far... The King of Scream does it again with another serving of scare. After I read it I shaved off both my kneecaps with a cheese grater and crawled on a fifteen mile salt trail. Well done!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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This is one of my favorite so far... The King of Scream does it again with another serving of scare. After I read it I shaved off both my kneecaps with a cheese grater and crawled on a fifteen mile salt trail. Well done!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thanks, 'Sak. Now, put some peroxide on those knees! OUCH!...heh heh.
Comment from michaelcahill
Everyone in the room jumps up behind me. "Read it out loud Mike!" so this will have to be a bit of a gang review. this was adored by all who were totally entertained and enthralled by the entire package. the star was your writing which was suitably ghoulish and dripping with blood and foreboding and spine tingling gore. not one request for me to sing Elvis on my guitar. go figure! great job. mike
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Everyone in the room jumps up behind me. "Read it out loud Mike!" so this will have to be a bit of a gang review. this was adored by all who were totally entertained and enthralled by the entire package. the star was your writing which was suitably ghoulish and dripping with blood and foreboding and spine tingling gore. not one request for me to sing Elvis on my guitar. go figure! great job. mike
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Hah, thanks, Mike, your review was very encouraging and...unique. I appreciate it!
Comment from MAMONIA
I don't know if I have enough fantastic adjectives to
describe this awesome trip I just took through your
fantasy land.
I am still working on the poem and then the looks that
I get from this organ player. I don't know which are
eerier....
Great work, as always.
Marie
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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I don't know if I have enough fantastic adjectives to
describe this awesome trip I just took through your
fantasy land.
I am still working on the poem and then the looks that
I get from this organ player. I don't know which are
eerier....
Great work, as always.
Marie
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thanks very much, Marie. I am very pleased that both gave you a bit of a scare...
Comment from Vampires kiss
Awesome poem!! I love the back drop and the organ music just adds to the effect! The poem itself keeps you glued to your seat and flows nicely together! Great job, I hope you keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Awesome poem!! I love the back drop and the organ music just adds to the effect! The poem itself keeps you glued to your seat and flows nicely together! Great job, I hope you keep up the good work.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Thanks, Vampire's kiss, I sure will try to, you can count on it!
Comment from write hand blue
Dean this is a great addition to your collection.
The rhyming scheme is a ghastly device to drag you unsuspecting, into the plot/picture.
I wondered If I should shut my window as I started to read.
You are blazing a trail that is going to be hard to follow.
This is well worthy six stars.
:)mel.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Dean this is a great addition to your collection.
The rhyming scheme is a ghastly device to drag you unsuspecting, into the plot/picture.
I wondered If I should shut my window as I started to read.
You are blazing a trail that is going to be hard to follow.
This is well worthy six stars.
:)mel.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013
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Oh yes, you should most definitely shut your window, LOL...
Thanks for your fantastic review, Mel...
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My pleasure. Meant to say: blazing a trail that is going to be hard 'for us' to follow. mel.