A Serendipitous Meeting
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Comment from Teri7
I am so sorry I don't have six stars to give you for this six-star chapter. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery from your words and the artwork. I am loving this too! I hope things go well on your trip and your son has a wonderful birthday and you all have a safe trip going and coming back home! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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I am so sorry I don't have six stars to give you for this six-star chapter. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery from your words and the artwork. I am loving this too! I hope things go well on your trip and your son has a wonderful birthday and you all have a safe trip going and coming back home! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 11-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Don't worry about the six stars. You're encouragement is perfect.
Comment from royowen
I think most of us change by decision, and Tyler, as well as attractive is also a man of principle, the marvellous thing in life is to make decisions to be highly prompted, but the difficult thing is sticking to that principle, Rebekah is fortunate. Beautifully written Barbara, , blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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I think most of us change by decision, and Tyler, as well as attractive is also a man of principle, the marvellous thing in life is to make decisions to be highly prompted, but the difficult thing is sticking to that principle, Rebekah is fortunate. Beautifully written Barbara, , blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. Tyler is very special and as we'll find out Rebeka is too, but need to learn to trust and forgive herself.
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Well done
Comment from Mistydawn
I hope Rebeka's baby will be alright. I do hope She and Tyler get together. I do think they'd make a perfect couple. Amber, she's so much fun, got to love her, lol. Your story is well-written, very interesting. Your characters a realistic, relatable. I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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I hope Rebeka's baby will be alright. I do hope She and Tyler get together. I do think they'd make a perfect couple. Amber, she's so much fun, got to love her, lol. Your story is well-written, very interesting. Your characters a realistic, relatable. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it.
Comment from Sanku
The story is moving on and progressing in a steady pace .Rebeka has to shrug off some of her conservative upbringing and relax. If she wants her baby to be safe she should trust him completely She has no other choice..
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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The story is moving on and progressing in a steady pace .Rebeka has to shrug off some of her conservative upbringing and relax. If she wants her baby to be safe she should trust him completely She has no other choice..
Comment Written 11-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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Rebeka will struggle with the conservative lifestyle and trusting Tyler. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Rebeka is certainly in a pickle. So much stuff going on at once. Tyler tries to warn her stress won't be good for the baby, but I can understand why she's feeling stress. I'm hoping the roads get cleared soon. She needs to see that doctor. She'll feel more comfortable with a woman ob/bgyn. Amber seems nice, but she apparently has men on her mind. Interesting revelation that Rebeka doesn't watch TV. That must come from her father's strict discipline. Great development. Lots of interesting things going on. judi
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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Rebeka is certainly in a pickle. So much stuff going on at once. Tyler tries to warn her stress won't be good for the baby, but I can understand why she's feeling stress. I'm hoping the roads get cleared soon. She needs to see that doctor. She'll feel more comfortable with a woman ob/bgyn. Amber seems nice, but she apparently has men on her mind. Interesting revelation that Rebeka doesn't watch TV. That must come from her father's strict discipline. Great development. Lots of interesting things going on. judi
Comment Written 10-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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We will learn more about Rebeka's strict upbringing very soon. On Wednesday the roads will open up and Tyler gets her to a doctor immediately. Thank you for the kind review.
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Oh, Boy! Thanks for the heads up! I'll be looking forward to it. judi
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Oh, Boy! Thanks for the heads up! I'll be looking forward to it. judi
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This is a story I want to follow. All I can say is wow! I can't wait to read more of this story. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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This is a story I want to follow. All I can say is wow! I can't wait to read more of this story. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is one of your most interesting stories. There are no bad guys with guns, but there are some really nice people trying to help Rebeka. Her father seems to be the villain in many ways.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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This is one of your most interesting stories. There are no bad guys with guns, but there are some really nice people trying to help Rebeka. Her father seems to be the villain in many ways.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jacob1395
I can definitely feel the spark between Tyler and Rebekah growing here, Barbara and now there's a chance that things might develop even more between them now he's told her he's single. An excellent chapter, Barbara, I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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I can definitely feel the spark between Tyler and Rebekah growing here, Barbara and now there's a chance that things might develop even more between them now he's told her he's single. An excellent chapter, Barbara, I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. Rebeka needs to trust him first. LOL
Comment from Douglas Goff
Happy Birthday to Steven. Time just keeps flying by, doesn't it.
Glad to see Zeke
In the book. Dogs are your signature.
Also, if sold and sandwiches make you a cook then I may be a chef. Cause I can also boil
an egg. Ha!
Fun
Douglas
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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Happy Birthday to Steven. Time just keeps flying by, doesn't it.
Glad to see Zeke
In the book. Dogs are your signature.
Also, if sold and sandwiches make you a cook then I may be a chef. Cause I can also boil
an egg. Ha!
Fun
Douglas
Comment Written 10-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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LOL Only my first published book doesn't have a dog. I have wondered if I shouldn't go back and rewrite it. LOL Thank you for the kind review. I have a feeling you're a decent cook.
Comment from Stacy M.S.
I think this is an excellent installment of your chapter.
I can tell you are a very well-written novelist. Your characters are very believable, as is their dialogue.
I already want to know what happens in the life of Rebeka.
I appreciate the extras, like the list of characters so we sort of get a feel of who is who as we read.
Excellent writing.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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I think this is an excellent installment of your chapter.
I can tell you are a very well-written novelist. Your characters are very believable, as is their dialogue.
I already want to know what happens in the life of Rebeka.
I appreciate the extras, like the list of characters so we sort of get a feel of who is who as we read.
Excellent writing.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement.
