God's Creation
Choices, NOT A MINUET13 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Humans are vulnerable and can rise and fall and we need the support of our faith to give us hope and freedom is the only way for us to prosper, I enjoyed your poem, love Dolly x x x
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Humans are vulnerable and can rise and fall and we need the support of our faith to give us hope and freedom is the only way for us to prosper, I enjoyed your poem, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 31-Jan-2025
Comment from Boogienights
This is great just the way it is. The subject matter has always fasinated me, the free will thing. There are so many questions l have about why God allows suffering to happen, when he could stop it. Anyway, it makes you think..thanks for sharing this.
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This is great just the way it is. The subject matter has always fasinated me, the free will thing. There are so many questions l have about why God allows suffering to happen, when he could stop it. Anyway, it makes you think..thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2025
Comment from Barry Penfold
Just a poem but one with a good message and nice image. Thanks for sharing. It is always difficult with these short poems to meet all the requirements. Good effort.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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Just a poem but one with a good message and nice image. Thanks for sharing. It is always difficult with these short poems to meet all the requirements. Good effort.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2025
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
The true challenge of being human. The ability to choose and choose badly if we feel like it. Free will is a gift but also a curse because we are always drawn to do the wrong thing. Thanks for sharing. You'll catch the contest next time.
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The true challenge of being human. The ability to choose and choose badly if we feel like it. Free will is a gift but also a curse because we are always drawn to do the wrong thing. Thanks for sharing. You'll catch the contest next time.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I saw Minute poetry guidelines, so it's understandable that you had a few struggles along that path. But, when you think about it, doesn't that make this poem all the more perfect, then? You fell a bit, but then you stood back up with this absolutely lovely and inspiring poem!! Win/win! Take a bow!! xoxoxox
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I saw Minute poetry guidelines, so it's understandable that you had a few struggles along that path. But, when you think about it, doesn't that make this poem all the more perfect, then? You fell a bit, but then you stood back up with this absolutely lovely and inspiring poem!! Win/win! Take a bow!! xoxoxox
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
Comment from Carol Clark2
This poem paints a picture of the story of the fall of creation into sin. Yes, God gave people the ability to make their own decisions and, sadly, we have taken full advantage of the gift. Please note that 'minute' is misspelled above the title and in your notes. I was at first confused about the dance (minuet). Good picture choice. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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This poem paints a picture of the story of the fall of creation into sin. Yes, God gave people the ability to make their own decisions and, sadly, we have taken full advantage of the gift. Please note that 'minute' is misspelled above the title and in your notes. I was at first confused about the dance (minuet). Good picture choice. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much for the excellent review.
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You're welcome. I enjoyed reading your poem. Carol
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Love this vision gift of free will to fall, I subscribe to the falling part:) as I am an expert. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Love this vision gift of free will to fall, I subscribe to the falling part:) as I am an expert. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very good artwork and presentation.
-I like your poem.
-You are right that rhyme
isn't needed for it.
-Very good description and
message in your poem.
-Sometimes a few words say a lot.
-A good contrast between being
created to stand, and with
the "gift of freewill," be "able to fall."
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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-Very good artwork and presentation.
-I like your poem.
-You are right that rhyme
isn't needed for it.
-Very good description and
message in your poem.
-Sometimes a few words say a lot.
-A good contrast between being
created to stand, and with
the "gift of freewill," be "able to fall."
-Very well done.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much for the excellent review.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi D&V
This poem fits into th coming season of Lent, The man in the picture seems to be praying for forgiveness as we do when our free will makes os fall.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of your week.
Joan
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Hi D&V
This poem fits into th coming season of Lent, The man in the picture seems to be praying for forgiveness as we do when our free will makes os fall.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of your week.
Joan
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much, Joan, for the excellent review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful statement and presentation of the true human condition here, Don -- we are here to stand in Him, lean on the Holy Spirit, but know that there are times we will fall... but He knew that and, thus, Jesus is ours! ;) Thanx for the beautiful statement, sir!! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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A beautiful statement and presentation of the true human condition here, Don -- we are here to stand in Him, lean on the Holy Spirit, but know that there are times we will fall... but He knew that and, thus, Jesus is ours! ;) Thanx for the beautiful statement, sir!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Yvette, very much for the excellent review.
