The drinkers journey
A poem depicting loneliness, addiction and despair3 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
Oh, this is so sad and depressing which is probably what the author is going for. Wonderful work! e description of the "raspy voice" and "ashen grey skin" is spot on!
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Oh, this is so sad and depressing which is probably what the author is going for. Wonderful work! e description of the "raspy voice" and "ashen grey skin" is spot on!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2025
Comment from Barry Penfold
What an interesting competition. Your entry is also interesting. Well written and it fits well with the competition requirements. Anyway, thanks for sharing and keep on writing.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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What an interesting competition. Your entry is also interesting. Well written and it fits well with the competition requirements. Anyway, thanks for sharing and keep on writing.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I was drawn to the way you shared this. Your choice of words like "raspy cough" and "ashen, haggard, grey" perfectly captures the toll liquor takes on the body. It's so well written. Great work!
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I was drawn to the way you shared this. Your choice of words like "raspy cough" and "ashen, haggard, grey" perfectly captures the toll liquor takes on the body. It's so well written. Great work!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2025
