A Grumpy Mother
Sicilians consider her like that.2 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Karen,
This kyrielle is a good take on the actions and effects of a volcano when it erupts. Even without the artwork I knew the poem was about a volcano before you mentioned it. Well done. I would not like to live anywhere near a volcano.
I think you meant grumpy not grumpy in the first stanza.
Hope this did well in the prompt contest
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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Hi Karen,
This kyrielle is a good take on the actions and effects of a volcano when it erupts. Even without the artwork I knew the poem was about a volcano before you mentioned it. Well done. I would not like to live anywhere near a volcano.
I think you meant grumpy not grumpy in the first stanza.
Hope this did well in the prompt contest
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 27-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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Thank you I just corrected the typo.
I did some last-minute edits to the first stanza and there were just 8 minutes to the deadline.
I was in panic mode and I made a typo. I appreciate you pointing it.
out.
This contest is not yet in the booth.
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You're welcome. We all make mistakes when in a hurry. Glad I could help.
Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Is mount Etna still active? How scary for the locals. You made me smile with your clear and concise words here about this mountain that is unpredictable and often grumpy! I had to laugh at your language here, I was entertained, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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Is mount Etna still active? How scary for the locals. You made me smile with your clear and concise words here about this mountain that is unpredictable and often grumpy! I had to laugh at your language here, I was entertained, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 27-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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Yes, the video I provided was taken on the 24th of August last year. She is still very active.
Glad you found the read engaging. I tried to write a neat refrain.
