Comment from Mrs Anna Howard

Excellent

Ah! The hard truth of how insignificant we all are. You bring that out very well. The part I enjoyed the most was the first stanza, describing the awe of admiring the open night sky.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025

Thank you.

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is an excellent poem for the challenge and it follows the syllable count. The topic is a bit sad because I think everyone is significant. The vast universe can be empty in large parts. So I'm a fan of humanity.
I enjoyed reading this.

Alex

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025

Thanks, Alex. Just reflecting existential angst.

reply by Alexandra Trovato on 27-Jan-2025

I get it. ;) It helps to do that. I think exististential angst is the best kind of angst. lol

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I enjoyed you Kyrielle and I can understand how you feel as we are just a speck of dust in comparison to the Universe! A fine sentiment and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025

Thank you, Dolly