Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

This is a very lovely Cinquain poem. It has all the elements for this style of poem. It is well organized and flows nicely from beginning to end.

Good luck in the contest.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025

Thank you, I hope I win!

reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 27-Jan-2025

You're welcome

Comment from Lana Marie

Excellent

This is good advice for the poem you entered in the cinquain contest. The beginning, reminds us that we have peace within it. It's up to us to tap into it. And being kind to others is in the New Testament Commandment to love others as we do ourselves. There would be more love and peace in this world if people love themselves better the way Christ loved us. I enjoyed your poem.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025

Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed my poem!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I agree with this post, finding peace is very personal and only we can achieve it. I think that having faith and hope helps us to be contented, I enjoyed your few words for the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025

Thank you!