Weddings and Marriages
A moment in time vs. forever4 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This cinquain seems to say the wedding is the easy part of the marriage. Keeping the marriage going needs the strength of a pine tree. This could be true. But I would say that the wedding arrangements are a lot of work and can be a test of the relationship for some. Using priest shows that you are Christian. Maybe use presider so it can be for all faiths or those who use a justice of the peace.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
P S I would like to let you know that I recently published a book titled, "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. There is a link to it at the end of my profile bio. I wouldn't have been able to do this without the aid and encouragement
of fellow FanStorians.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Hi
This cinquain seems to say the wedding is the easy part of the marriage. Keeping the marriage going needs the strength of a pine tree. This could be true. But I would say that the wedding arrangements are a lot of work and can be a test of the relationship for some. Using priest shows that you are Christian. Maybe use presider so it can be for all faiths or those who use a justice of the peace.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
P S I would like to let you know that I recently published a book titled, "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. There is a link to it at the end of my profile bio. I wouldn't have been able to do this without the aid and encouragement
of fellow FanStorians.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Hey, thanks for your feedback and the encouragement. Congrats on your publication.
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No problem, Trina. Thanks for the congrats.
Joan
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a very lovely Cinquain poem. It has all the elements for this style of poem. It is well organized and flows nicely from beginning to end.
Good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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This is a very lovely Cinquain poem. It has all the elements for this style of poem. It is well organized and flows nicely from beginning to end.
Good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 27-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Thank you Cecilia. Blessings, my friend!
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You're welcome my friend
Comment from patcelaw
This is nicely written for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless your weekend. Keep writing and keep sharing. Patricia.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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This is nicely written for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless your weekend. Keep writing and keep sharing. Patricia.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Appreciated. Thank you so much for your kind feedback.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Very lovely poem and presentation. Your words flow well just as does the impressionist-style wedding dress. I was married on a dock with my husband, friends, family, and seagulls on wood posts. We saw a priest prior who gave us his Bible but the ceremony was civilly ordained.
Alex
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Very lovely poem and presentation. Your words flow well just as does the impressionist-style wedding dress. I was married on a dock with my husband, friends, family, and seagulls on wood posts. We saw a priest prior who gave us his Bible but the ceremony was civilly ordained.
Alex
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your feedback, and congrats on your nuptials!
