Comment from
Barry Penfold
A well put together Sonnet. Love burns and dies. The seasons go on. Thanks for sharing and I hope you go well in the contest.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
I loved the sentiment and rhymes in this sweet natured sonnet but the iambic pentameter which gives the sonnet a tuneful sound is completely missing from this post. I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025