Grass
gathering wildflowers in an open field2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is wonderful. "Glistening with the blood of sunken prayers" really grabbed my attention. Your use of "leaves depressed" and "Guarantee love has walked here prior" creates a beautiful sense of peace. The whole poem has a thoughtful feel to it. Fantastic work! Keep writing, you've got a knack for it!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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Your poem is wonderful. "Glistening with the blood of sunken prayers" really grabbed my attention. Your use of "leaves depressed" and "Guarantee love has walked here prior" creates a beautiful sense of peace. The whole poem has a thoughtful feel to it. Fantastic work! Keep writing, you've got a knack for it!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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Thanks for reading and leaving a wonderful review! I very much appreciate it!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
As wild flowers are often known as weeds, I felt the strength and might of these flowers in your poem as you call them beasts. I enjoyed your unusual word choices here for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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As wild flowers are often known as weeds, I felt the strength and might of these flowers in your poem as you call them beasts. I enjoyed your unusual word choices here for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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Thanks Dolly! I really appreciate your review!
