Forging Destiny
So much more than legacy . . .19 total reviews
Comment from Shanbreen
Yvette, I have been under the weather and have been overwhelmed by everything that's going on in my life. As such I have not had the time or the energy to read, write and paint. But putting that aside, you poem is marvelous. It says so much in your three lines. I, however, am at a stage where I try to determine the 'real' truth. Best for the contest my friend.
Hope you are keeping well.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Yvette, I have been under the weather and have been overwhelmed by everything that's going on in my life. As such I have not had the time or the energy to read, write and paint. But putting that aside, you poem is marvelous. It says so much in your three lines. I, however, am at a stage where I try to determine the 'real' truth. Best for the contest my friend.
Hope you are keeping well.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the shining stars, my friend -- and so good to see your name in the listing!! ;) I am so sorry to hear that life is weighing on you these days... please know that it is certainly so great to hear from you whenever you can chime in here!! And you absolutely HAVE to share a painting or two... I will send you my email in the message response!! So exciting! ;) As always, I send you a big smile and even a virtual hug, sir, and may the sun shine in!! :-) Yvette
Comment from judiverse
A beautiful presentation. The artwork is a perfect choice. Excellent thought in this and expressed in one thought. Yes, our future beckons and we have to face the truth about our lives. Good idea to use a different color for your third line. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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A beautiful presentation. The artwork is a perfect choice. Excellent thought in this and expressed in one thought. Yes, our future beckons and we have to face the truth about our lives. Good idea to use a different color for your third line. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Lady Judi -- Always good to hear from you! ;) Yvette
[Apologize for the delay in response, been a long past week or so at work with some family visits in there... take care! :-) ;-)]
Comment from Sally Law
Yvette dear,
Yes, truth speaks loudly as you said so beautifully in your lune poetry. Some don't like the truth but others do and are set free by it. Truth really does set the soul free. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming lune poetry contest.
Sal Xoxo
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Yvette dear,
Yes, truth speaks loudly as you said so beautifully in your lune poetry. Some don't like the truth but others do and are set free by it. Truth really does set the soul free. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming lune poetry contest.
Sal Xoxo
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Lady Sal, and for all of your support -- Always so good to hear from you! ;) Yvette
[Apologize for the delay in response, been a long past week or so at work with some family visits in there... take care! :-) ;-)]
Comment from Mintybee
This lune makes the reader think. What is the nature of forever? What is the nature of truth? What lasts in life? I had to read this a few times. I like it.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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This lune makes the reader think. What is the nature of forever? What is the nature of truth? What lasts in life? I had to read this a few times. I like it.
Mintybee
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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OMG!! Thank you so much, Lady M, for those awesome stars... you've made my afternoon! :) So good to read your reviews over here and I look forward to reading you again -- keep on smiling out there! ;) Yvette
[Apologize for the delay in response, been a long past week or so at work with some family visits in there... take care! :-) ;-)]
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, this one goes deep, what is forever and how long can you keep up with it? Thank you so much for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Wow, this one goes deep, what is forever and how long can you keep up with it? Thank you so much for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, my lady -- Always good to hear from you! ;) Yvette
[Apologize for the delay in response, been a long past week or so at work with some family visits in there... take care! :-) ;-)]
Comment from royowen
Yep, it has always been thus, eternity is a lot longer than 70, 80, or even a hundred years, as Methuselah age 972, eventually found out that his parents Adam and Eve, had sold his birthright, but depending on Jesus preaching to the captives, I have no idea where he is, along with the patriarchs and matriarchs, beautifully written Yvette, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Yep, it has always been thus, eternity is a lot longer than 70, 80, or even a hundred years, as Methuselah age 972, eventually found out that his parents Adam and Eve, had sold his birthright, but depending on Jesus preaching to the captives, I have no idea where he is, along with the patriarchs and matriarchs, beautifully written Yvette, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Such a wonderful review, Sir Roy -- always enjoy reading your reviews when you're in those 'talkative moods'... thank you!! ;) Yvette
[Apologize for the delay in response, been a long past week or so at work with some family visits in there... take care! :-) ;-)]
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Well done
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Yvette,
Your poem has a very strong truth.
You used your syllables wisely.
The truth is twisted today, but the real truth always, eventually, surfaces.
I believe God's truth is the one that will triumph.
Blessings and best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Yvette,
Your poem has a very strong truth.
You used your syllables wisely.
The truth is twisted today, but the real truth always, eventually, surfaces.
I believe God's truth is the one that will triumph.
Blessings and best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Lady C -- Always good to hear from you! ;) Yvette
[Apologize for the delay in response, been a long past week or so at work with some family visits in there... take care! :-) ;-)]
Comment from pome lover
Lovely Lune! and clever remark in author's notes. ha!
Don't know if I can keep on truckin' to get 150 characters, but as you can see, I'm tryin.
But seriously, your "pome" and thought processes are very impressive, madam. I know you're thrilled.
Katharine
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Lovely Lune! and clever remark in author's notes. ha!
Don't know if I can keep on truckin' to get 150 characters, but as you can see, I'm tryin.
But seriously, your "pome" and thought processes are very impressive, madam. I know you're thrilled.
Katharine
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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You so funny Ms. 150! ;) :) Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Lady Kat -- You know it's always good to hear from you! ;) Yvette
[Apologize for the delay in response, been a long past week or so at work with some family visits in there... take care! :-) ;-)]
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hope family visits were fun!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Yvette,
This is a beautiful lune poem. Truth sometimes needs to be spoken loudly for some people to hear it, otherwise they don't. The picture you chose is wonderful.
Well done my friend and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Yvette,
This is a beautiful lune poem. Truth sometimes needs to be spoken loudly for some people to hear it, otherwise they don't. The picture you chose is wonderful.
Well done my friend and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, my lady -- Always good to hear from you! ;) Yvette
[Apologize for the delay in response, been a long past week or so at work with some family visits in there... take care! :-) ;-)]
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You are so welcome my friend. Stay busy it keeps you young.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and presentation, Yvette.
-You wrote a good lune with a good topic.
-A very good opening line, followed by
good descriptive detail about how
"forever beckons...loudly through truth."
-Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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-Good artwork and presentation, Yvette.
-You wrote a good lune with a good topic.
-A very good opening line, followed by
good descriptive detail about how
"forever beckons...loudly through truth."
-Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Lady Pam -- Always good to hear from you here in Dixie! ;) Yvette
[Apologize for the delay in response, been a long past week or so at work with some family visits in there... take care! :-) ;-)]
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You are very welcome, Yvette. No apology is necessary. It sounds like you were very busy. Take care.
