Festival at the Feeder
A Tyburn poem3 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great Tyburn poem. You have followed the rules of the contest guide lines. You have incorporated the words in the other sentences.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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This is a great Tyburn poem. You have followed the rules of the contest guide lines. You have incorporated the words in the other sentences.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 21-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Cecelia. I am delighted you enjoyed this poem.
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You're welcome
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very good artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with
good descriptive words.
-You do a good job describing
the birds at the feeder.
-A good concluding line that
shows what happens when
the seeds are gone.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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-Very good artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with
good descriptive words.
-You do a good job describing
the birds at the feeder.
-A good concluding line that
shows what happens when
the seeds are gone.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much, Pam, for your kind praise of my poem.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I enjoyed reading this poem. I'm not familiar with the form but it was fun to read. The imagery and descriptive action painted a picture. The photo image supported your words well.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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I enjoyed reading this poem. I'm not familiar with the form but it was fun to read. The imagery and descriptive action painted a picture. The photo image supported your words well.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much for your glowing praise, Alex, and all those glittering stars. This Tyburn was fun to write because all that description is so true about my feathered friends.
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You're welcome.
