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Venom and Poison

Dedicated to my kids Amiyah Holloway, Arianna Young(Hannah)

3 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Needs Improvement
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This could be a wonderful post if not for the use of 'text wording' and the lack of punctuation (which extends from a text format rather than a written word format). Would love to read once you've made those updates and corrections...

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2025

Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Congrats on your first post! Your heartfelt message really hit home. I can feel the depth of your love and the pain you're expressing for the moments lost. Your words are a powerful reminder to cherish every moment we have with the people we love. It's clear how deeply you care about your children and the memories you wish you could hold onto. The raw emotion in your writing shows just how important it is to let go of anything that harms us and holds us back. I truly hope this message helps others to value the time they have and to choose what's best for their peace and well being. Sending you strength and love.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
    Thank you very much very much appreciated I wanted to put it on the front page of the paper maybe it will help someone
Comment from DonandVicki
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There is so much truth in your essay. Drugs, alcohol, and many other poisons can take our loved ones away. I enjoyed reading your true story about the evils of society.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
    yes its all truth life experiences and choices we make can change our life forever