Perfect Poem
a twenty-syllable poem8 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
I couldn't think of a better subject to write about. Poetry is from the heart snd obviously your family is your dearest source of joy. Your poems have often highloghted this love. Write on!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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I couldn't think of a better subject to write about. Poetry is from the heart snd obviously your family is your dearest source of joy. Your poems have often highloghted this love. Write on!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Thank you, June
Comment from Trina Layne
Your wife and children should be lucky to have you. This was sweet. The message was simple but resonated. Best to you in this contest. Cheers and sunshine from Barbados!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Your wife and children should be lucky to have you. This was sweet. The message was simple but resonated. Best to you in this contest. Cheers and sunshine from Barbados!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Trina
Comment from Darlene BoClair
We write first of what we know and then of how we have come to know so much.
This perfect poem meet the requirements for a poet entry into the
writing prompt. This is a good thing.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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We write first of what we know and then of how we have come to know so much.
This perfect poem meet the requirements for a poet entry into the
writing prompt. This is a good thing.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Darlene.
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I love a perfect poem.
Comment from Rick Gardner
Says how life is meant to be, a true joy for all. A husband's love, his care for his children. To give yourself without questions, your duty to be what our Lord taught.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Says how life is meant to be, a true joy for all. A husband's love, his care for his children. To give yourself without questions, your duty to be what our Lord taught.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Rick.
Comment from lancellot
Ah, but this poem isn't written about a wife, children or family. So, does that mean it is not a perfect poem?
Just kidding, this is nice, and for such an individual, having and treasuring a loving family would be perfect.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2025
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Ah, but this poem isn't written about a wife, children or family. So, does that mean it is not a perfect poem?
Just kidding, this is nice, and for such an individual, having and treasuring a loving family would be perfect.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Lancellot
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 20 syllables writing prompt. This does sounds like the perfect poem. It also sounds like a blessed life to be able to write that perfect poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2025
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An excellent entry for the 20 syllables writing prompt. This does sounds like the perfect poem. It also sounds like a blessed life to be able to write that perfect poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Marilyn
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
There's nothing more beautiful than a loving family. This was well written and has the correct syllable count for the challenge. Your image presentation supports this poem well.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2025
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There's nothing more beautiful than a loving family. This was well written and has the correct syllable count for the challenge. Your image presentation supports this poem well.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 18-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2025
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Thanks, Alex
Comment from royowen
I can remember when someone asked me what was the best poem I'd ever written, I replied, I haven't written it yet. I agree with you, I have invested a lot of my time writing about, to, a for my family, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2025
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I can remember when someone asked me what was the best poem I'd ever written, I replied, I haven't written it yet. I agree with you, I have invested a lot of my time writing about, to, a for my family, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2025
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Thanks, Roy
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Well done
