Old Man at the River
An old man paints a river scene34 total reviews
Comment from Shanbreen
Pam, I love this poem. I didn't know you were an artist too. Is there anything you can't do? =) I was a bit unsure about the paint being thinned. To me it gives emphasis to diluted paint being better than paint applied directly. Just an opinion.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Pam, I love this poem. I didn't know you were an artist too. Is there anything you can't do? =) I was a bit unsure about the paint being thinned. To me it gives emphasis to diluted paint being better than paint applied directly. Just an opinion.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Hi my friend. Oil paints and acrylic paints always need to be thinned or the paint would be too thick on the canvas.
But since you didn’t know that I can see what you were thinking
Thank you for the great review
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Pam, I didn't mention that I am an artist and dabble in oils, watercolor, and an occasional acrylic. I don't do much showing now, but I used to and sold the paintings for charity.
I often use paint without thinning, to get the texture I want. Actually Yvette Roger wanted to see some of my work and I send it to her via email.
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You could send some to me via email. I’d like to see them.
Comment from Neonewman
This is a great piece you have delivered, my friend. I enjoyed the flow of this story presented. I ended with a warm feeling inside. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
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This is a great piece you have delivered, my friend. I enjoyed the flow of this story presented. I ended with a warm feeling inside. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 18-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your wonderful review. Blessings.
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My pleasure, Pam, and thank you for the blessings.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was lovely, Pam. Your words capture thoughts that must be going through the man at the river's mind as he paints the lovely scene. You've added more detail than that which pours out of the painting, delving deeper into the reason the artist is creating it for. I think I'll find a picture and see what I can spot beyond the painting. This was excellent, my friend. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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That was lovely, Pam. Your words capture thoughts that must be going through the man at the river's mind as he paints the lovely scene. You've added more detail than that which pours out of the painting, delving deeper into the reason the artist is creating it for. I think I'll find a picture and see what I can spot beyond the painting. This was excellent, my friend. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 18-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Sandra for your warm and lovely review and for sharing your thoughts about what you want to do with a painting
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Old Man at the River, captures the many big and small sights which contribute to the painting. This gift will present a heart and the value it holds for a special woman.
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This poem, Old Man at the River, captures the many big and small sights which contribute to the painting. This gift will present a heart and the value it holds for a special woman.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Bill for the great review
Comment from Charles D Ezell
Out of six but it deserves it. I can just see the old guy sitting there trying to capture the moment. I was think about the Mississippi so long so wide but yet so narrow. Good post.
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Out of six but it deserves it. I can just see the old guy sitting there trying to capture the moment. I was think about the Mississippi so long so wide but yet so narrow. Good post.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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You sound like a philosopher, Charles. So long so wide, but so narrow seems to be an oxymoron. How can it be so wide and also so narrow? I can understand that because I’ve been to different spots on it where it is wired in one spot, but narrow, and the other
Thank you for the virtual six stars and as usual for the great review
Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautifully written piece of poetry dear pamusart! I love the storyline. I thoroughly enjoyed your poem!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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This is a beautifully written piece of poetry dear pamusart! I love the storyline. I thoroughly enjoyed your poem!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Rebekka for taking the time to read and review my poem and especially for being generous enough to give me a six star rating
Comment from LJbutterfly
You are a phenomenal poetic storyteller. An old man sits all day, painting a beautiful scene of the river, but sees only what he wants to include in his painting which is a tribute to his diseased mother. Your descriptions and story are well thought out and enjoyable.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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You are a phenomenal poetic storyteller. An old man sits all day, painting a beautiful scene of the river, but sees only what he wants to include in his painting which is a tribute to his diseased mother. Your descriptions and story are well thought out and enjoyable.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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You’re making me blush LJ with your compliments. Thank you for a wonderful review.
Comment from Barry Penfold
Totally lovely package. Image and wording is spot on. Thanks for sharing and I am glad the man drowning was going to be saved. A fine tribute to mum. Well done. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Totally lovely package. Image and wording is spot on. Thanks for sharing and I am glad the man drowning was going to be saved. A fine tribute to mum. Well done. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you Barry for a wonderful review. Cheers to you as well.
Comment from mermaids
I enjoyed reading your words and love how the painting is for this man's Mom, even though she has passed on. You tell a story here in poetic form. Your poem reads like a mini movie. Your descriptive words create a clear scene and I admire your smooth rhyming of words. Excellent work here.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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I enjoyed reading your words and love how the painting is for this man's Mom, even though she has passed on. You tell a story here in poetic form. Your poem reads like a mini movie. Your descriptive words create a clear scene and I admire your smooth rhyming of words. Excellent work here.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025
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Wow. Thank you so much mermaids for taking the time to read and review my poem and for giving me the generous rating of six stars.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Pam,
This poem tells a nice rhyming story about the painter and the reason for the painting. I don't know why doesn't see the swimmer that's drowning. Or maybe he thinks the boater will get to him in time, so he doesn't react to try to save him. It wouldn't me such a serene painting if he included the drowning swimmer. This is a good way to finish the grieving process.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of your week.
Joan
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Hi Pam,
This poem tells a nice rhyming story about the painter and the reason for the painting. I don't know why doesn't see the swimmer that's drowning. Or maybe he thinks the boater will get to him in time, so he doesn't react to try to save him. It wouldn't me such a serene painting if he included the drowning swimmer. This is a good way to finish the grieving process.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of your week.
Joan
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Joan for your thoughtful and wonderful review. As artists we sometimes get so involved with our work that we don’t notice other things. I’m sure it’s happened to you sometimes when you write.
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No problem, Pam. Yes, it does.
Joan
