Can You See The Real Me?
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Bailey Mine - Part 1 "A collection of ten Novella styled stories
2 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I must admit that I was not very convinced that I wanted to read this until the end, but I am glad I did because it captivated me, and I quite understand your technicalities even if I am not an engineer. Well, done, love the plot and the layout of the story.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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I must admit that I was not very convinced that I wanted to read this until the end, but I am glad I did because it captivated me, and I quite understand your technicalities even if I am not an engineer. Well, done, love the plot and the layout of the story.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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Thanks for the review and rating.. I only have one more Novella to post then I'll get back to the short stories. Engineers never appreciated and always overworked-underpaid, "We make the world work"
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed how this chapter built tension and kept me interested. The way you captured Dave's sarcasm was fantastic - there's something really satisfying about how the relationship evolved. The ending left me curious. What's next? Great work, and I can't wait to see where you take the story from here!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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I really enjoyed how this chapter built tension and kept me interested. The way you captured Dave's sarcasm was fantastic - there's something really satisfying about how the relationship evolved. The ending left me curious. What's next? Great work, and I can't wait to see where you take the story from here!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2025
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Thx, I know they are "long" stories, so I appreciate the effort
