Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
I can really feel the tension you experienced in this story. The way you describe the unsettling moments made me feel like I was right there with you. I was second guessing every choice. I love how you shared your internal struggle. The details really bring the experience to life. I hope your future travels are much smoother and safer! Keep sharing these honest stories.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2025
Comment from
lancellot
Hmm, this is a strange one. I'm having a hard time believing this is non-fiction. Some the things seem too far-fetched in today's world. Sorry. I would advise using quotation marks for the speeches all the time, not just sometimes. It makes it easier to follow and makes the writing consistent.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2025