2024 Japanese Poetry
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6 total reviews
Comment from RJ Heritage
Perhaps grandma is reflecting ok those bygone years when she had her chops and could do the same. Many times little things make us relive these younger times in our lives with pleasure.
RJ
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Perhaps grandma is reflecting ok those bygone years when she had her chops and could do the same. Many times little things make us relive these younger times in our lives with pleasure.
RJ
Comment Written 27-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Turtles don't have teeth.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
Gypsy hugs
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That is ture, I was expressing the feeling of empathy, but did not remember that they didn't have teeth.
RJ
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What a wonderful old lady! Who needs teeth when you're as joyful as her. I like the "kinship" with the turtle because there is an undeniable similarity. Cleverly done in your Gogyohka verse, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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What a wonderful old lady! Who needs teeth when you're as joyful as her. I like the "kinship" with the turtle because there is an undeniable similarity. Cleverly done in your Gogyohka verse, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 26-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
lol! she looks so fun!
a great gogyohka with cool imagery and smooth flow throughout...
i noticed no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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lol! she looks so fun!
a great gogyohka with cool imagery and smooth flow throughout...
i noticed no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 26-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this cute poem. I have a friend who has no teeth and is finally able to get false teeth. She struggles eating. I never thought about it but probably much like a turtle. Your presentation was perfect.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Thank you for sharing this cute poem. I have a friend who has no teeth and is finally able to get false teeth. She struggles eating. I never thought about it but probably much like a turtle. Your presentation was perfect.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
There would be nothing worse than losing all one's teeth, or even most of them, they are decidedly useful when eating one's food, otherwise we'd have to 'gum' everything, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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There would be nothing worse than losing all one's teeth, or even most of them, they are decidedly useful when eating one's food, otherwise we'd have to 'gum' everything, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Thank you
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Welcome
Comment from Sugarray77
Haha... I love your humor and comparison technique that you use to showcase this lovely Japanese form, Gypsy.. well done on a fun and enjoyable read that is always a signature of your work. :)
Melissa
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Haha... I love your humor and comparison technique that you use to showcase this lovely Japanese form, Gypsy.. well done on a fun and enjoyable read that is always a signature of your work. :)
Melissa
Comment Written 26-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
