Christmas With Eleanor
As she wishes everyone a Merry Christmas14 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
I guess this is a stand-alone story as it doesn't have a chapter. It was good to connect with all these characters during the holidays. Everyone seems in good spirits for the holidays except for Miriam who senses trouble coming. Have a very merry Christmas.
Beth
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I guess this is a stand-alone story as it doesn't have a chapter. It was good to connect with all these characters during the holidays. Everyone seems in good spirits for the holidays except for Miriam who senses trouble coming. Have a very merry Christmas.
Beth
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from royowen
I can remember my Enid Blighten books when I was a boy growing up, she was a famous children's book author, writing about the famous five who were British high school children growing up and solving mysteries and drams, I loved them, now you have a grown up version, but American, well done, blessings Roy
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I can remember my Enid Blighten books when I was a boy growing up, she was a famous children's book author, writing about the famous five who were British high school children growing up and solving mysteries and drams, I loved them, now you have a grown up version, but American, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Danni (you have her name spelled with a "y" in a few places) is a bit cruel as she teases Tango, who she knows is crazy about her although she is a ghost. If Mariam senses trouble, she is sure to be correct. You wisely give no hint of what it is. Dylan seems trapped between two very scary women.
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Danni (you have her name spelled with a "y" in a few places) is a bit cruel as she teases Tango, who she knows is crazy about her although she is a ghost. If Mariam senses trouble, she is sure to be correct. You wisely give no hint of what it is. Dylan seems trapped between two very scary women.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
Everyone in a Merry Christmas mood. And as the day grows closer, I'm sure it will only get more holly and jolly and festive as can be. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Everyone in a Merry Christmas mood. And as the day grows closer, I'm sure it will only get more holly and jolly and festive as can be. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Are you still going to Vegas or did you make other plans? I take off tomorrow morning. Already did instacart for groceries and everything my great granddaughters could possibly want ...spoil I say! Now I just need to get there and with Asti in hand wish them the very Merriest of Christmas's. And I shall wish you the same. .....
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Yes, I'm going to protest all that drinking and gambling on Christmas Day. LOL. Have a nice trip and a Christmas to remember! Smiles and hugs back at ya! Ric
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Another Christmas tale, this time with your familiar characters and of course your wonderful Eleanor who is taken back in time as she becomes nostalgic at the sight of her younger self. Your ending of course hints at further adventures as she and Charles dissolve "into shimmering light." We know that they will all meet again. Thank you for sharing this delightful Christmas reunion, Carol. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Another Christmas tale, this time with your familiar characters and of course your wonderful Eleanor who is taken back in time as she becomes nostalgic at the sight of her younger self. Your ending of course hints at further adventures as she and Charles dissolve "into shimmering light." We know that they will all meet again. Thank you for sharing this delightful Christmas reunion, Carol. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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I've written another one and also one for tomorrow morning before I leave for the plane. They all have clues in them for the story I will write in January. I hope it sets up a little intrigue. Thank you so much, Debbie. Have a wonderful Holiday season.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Teri7
Carol, This is a very well written chapter. You used very good descriptive words and great dialogue. I look forward to reading more. We have our middle son and his wife coming in to town tomorrow evening. May be quite busy this week, but I will check on fan story when I can. love you dear friend! Teri
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Carol, This is a very well written chapter. You used very good descriptive words and great dialogue. I look forward to reading more. We have our middle son and his wife coming in to town tomorrow evening. May be quite busy this week, but I will check on fan story when I can. love you dear friend! Teri
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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I've written two more seperate ones before I catch the plane tomorrow and then I am off to North Carolina. I've got suggestions and clues in each one for the novel I will start in January. Thanks so much for reading and please enjoy the Holiday Season. Peace and Love to you and yours.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
This is a wonderful story. i am so glad you brought Charles back for Eleanor. This is leading up to another book and I can't wait. You're giving us a taste of what is to come. Brilliant.
Great job my friend
Cecilia
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Carol,
This is a wonderful story. i am so glad you brought Charles back for Eleanor. This is leading up to another book and I can't wait. You're giving us a taste of what is to come. Brilliant.
Great job my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can't wait to read more. I feel somethings brewing too.
The detective, her translucent form shimmering in the holiday lights, appeared alongside him. (doesn't make sense.)
"Troubles coming. I can feel it in my bones."
Far across the Atlantic, the snow fell heavily over the (need to indicate scene change, like you did earlier)
Charles stepped closer, his voice gentle. "I captured your strength. (gentle,)
The Inspector clinked (because of 'The' inspector has a lower case 'i')
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I can't wait to read more. I feel somethings brewing too.
The detective, her translucent form shimmering in the holiday lights, appeared alongside him. (doesn't make sense.)
"Troubles coming. I can feel it in my bones."
Far across the Atlantic, the snow fell heavily over the (need to indicate scene change, like you did earlier)
Charles stepped closer, his voice gentle. "I captured your strength. (gentle,)
The Inspector clinked (because of 'The' inspector has a lower case 'i')
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
Comment from Tim Margetts
Well my dear friend.
Another 6 for a couple of reasons, it may help you reach your goal so consider it a bit of a Christmas gift from across the pond. And also, as it was nice to see another foray into the life? Of Eleanor.
But, snow? England?
They must be north of the Thames LOL
Tim x
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Well my dear friend.
Another 6 for a couple of reasons, it may help you reach your goal so consider it a bit of a Christmas gift from across the pond. And also, as it was nice to see another foray into the life? Of Eleanor.
But, snow? England?
They must be north of the Thames LOL
Tim x
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
Oh, lovely, another series with Eleanor and the other characters. There should be an interesting battle over Dylan, with two strong women vying for his attention. Will Eleanor step in? Of course she will! LOL. Blessings and merry Christmas. Carol
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Oh, lovely, another series with Eleanor and the other characters. There should be an interesting battle over Dylan, with two strong women vying for his attention. Will Eleanor step in? Of course she will! LOL. Blessings and merry Christmas. Carol
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024