Willing Hearts
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10 total reviews
Comment from Sankey
This was a really wonderful chapter. I loved all the procedures and the romance throughout. I look forward to much more. Just one possible spag. I('m) going to mess up, a lot."
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This was a really wonderful chapter. I loved all the procedures and the romance throughout. I look forward to much more. Just one possible spag. I('m) going to mess up, a lot."
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
Comment from Sanku
This.is a beautiful song.thank you for including it.
This is a wonderfully romantic chapter .I enjoyed reading the details of their date .Even the lessons on pistols didn't take the shine out of the romance
Merry Christmas to you and your family
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This.is a beautiful song.thank you for including it.
This is a wonderfully romantic chapter .I enjoyed reading the details of their date .Even the lessons on pistols didn't take the shine out of the romance
Merry Christmas to you and your family
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very nice post, Barb. Good things happened, and there wasn't any surprises. I was really looking forward to hear Frank Sinatra. That didn't sound like his voice.
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Very nice post, Barb. Good things happened, and there wasn't any surprises. I was really looking forward to hear Frank Sinatra. That didn't sound like his voice.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
Comment from lyenochka
Oh dear! I feel like that young boy that complains about the movie that has "too much kissing"! Sorry, I don't have the romantic gene. Lol. Anyway, I'm glad that they finally had a real date even if interrupted by work.
Merry Christmas to you and yours!!
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Oh dear! I feel like that young boy that complains about the movie that has "too much kissing"! Sorry, I don't have the romantic gene. Lol. Anyway, I'm glad that they finally had a real date even if interrupted by work.
Merry Christmas to you and yours!!
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
Comment from Teri7
Another great chapter my friend. Great dialogue between Sami and Noah. I think they both are smitten now. I had guys in the day that felt that way about me. This takes me way back in time! Thank you for sharing my friend. Merry Christmas to you and your family! love and blessings, Teri
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Another great chapter my friend. Great dialogue between Sami and Noah. I think they both are smitten now. I had guys in the day that felt that way about me. This takes me way back in time! Thank you for sharing my friend. Merry Christmas to you and your family! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Aw, what a romantic evening! These two are so loved up aren't they? But still signs of tension regarding Sami's determination not to play the trophy wife and be free to do things other than simply cook and be escorted everywhere. Excellent dialogue and an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing, Barbara. Warm wishes. Debbie.
maitre d(')
I('m) going to mess up a lot
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Aw, what a romantic evening! These two are so loved up aren't they? But still signs of tension regarding Sami's determination not to play the trophy wife and be free to do things other than simply cook and be escorted everywhere. Excellent dialogue and an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing, Barbara. Warm wishes. Debbie.
maitre d(')
I('m) going to mess up a lot
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
Comment from Ulla
Hi, Barbara, yet another great chapter. Very descriptive and full of great dialogue. Now I will be looking forward to the next chapter.
Happy Christmas to you and your family. A big Hug, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Hi, Barbara, yet another great chapter. Very descriptive and full of great dialogue. Now I will be looking forward to the next chapter.
Happy Christmas to you and your family. A big Hug, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement.
Comment from lancellot
It is a well written chapter, filled with that old "really old" fashioned slow paced, gentlemanly (or Christian) romance/dating your fans enjoy so much. Though, I would caution between Noah's actions crossing the line between a caring gentleman and fatherly. Too many times (it appears), Sami is treated like and behaves more like a child than an innocent woman.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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It is a well written chapter, filled with that old "really old" fashioned slow paced, gentlemanly (or Christian) romance/dating your fans enjoy so much. Though, I would caution between Noah's actions crossing the line between a caring gentleman and fatherly. Too many times (it appears), Sami is treated like and behaves more like a child than an innocent woman.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Barbara,
What a great chapter to your book. Even though I picked up in the middle of this book I have been able to piece things together. That's because you are a great author.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Barbara,
What a great chapter to your book. Even though I picked up in the middle of this book I have been able to piece things together. That's because you are a great author.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it.
Comment from Begin Again
"I'll see around ten o'clock. (Just a missing word)
A great chapter showing how Noah and Sami have progressed in their relationship. Truly enjoyed it.
Merry Christmas!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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"I'll see around ten o'clock. (Just a missing word)
A great chapter showing how Noah and Sami have progressed in their relationship. Truly enjoyed it.
Merry Christmas!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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I have added that missing word. I appreciate the catch. Thank you for the kind review.