Enduring Love
Age is no barrier to keep loving someone.7 total reviews
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Ah, this sentiment is perfect! Of course, age has no relevance when it comes to love; it deepens with time and becomes less physical and more of an existence of two hearts beating together as one.
Your image is perfect - my hands have begun to look like this, but the wedding ring I wear and the occasional bracelet tells a story of an earlier time that lives on in my heart.
Very well done.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Ah, this sentiment is perfect! Of course, age has no relevance when it comes to love; it deepens with time and becomes less physical and more of an existence of two hearts beating together as one.
Your image is perfect - my hands have begun to look like this, but the wedding ring I wear and the occasional bracelet tells a story of an earlier time that lives on in my heart.
Very well done.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your heartfelt and touching words, Pam. Your perspective on love is truly beautiful, highlighting how it transcends age and becomes a profound connection between two hearts. The symbolism of your wedding ring and bracelet as carriers of cherished memories is incredibly moving.
It's an honor to share these sentiments with you. Your message resonates deeply and adds a rich layer to the understanding of enduring love.
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Thank you for your heartfelt and touching words, Pam. Your perspective on love is truly beautiful, highlighting how it transcends age and becomes a profound connection between two hearts. The symbolism of your wedding ring and bracelet as carriers of cherished memories is incredibly moving.
It's an honor to share these sentiments with you. Your message resonates deeply and adds a rich layer to the understanding of enduring love.
XXX
Comment from Trina Layne
Excellent point. Your writing is beautiful. It is simple, yet eloquent. I was able to connect to it with ease. Congratulations on what you have achieved. I wish your entry much success!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Excellent point. Your writing is beautiful. It is simple, yet eloquent. I was able to connect to it with ease. Congratulations on what you have achieved. I wish your entry much success!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Your feedback is truly exceptional as well! It's wonderful to see such appreciation and thoughtful recognition of the beauty in someone's writing. Your support and encouragement undoubtedly mean a lot.
Comment from June Sargent
In our 56th year if marriage - these wrinkled, arthritic hands can testify to your words. If we remain young at heart, the world stays brighter and feels lighter. Thanks for sharing your perspective.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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In our 56th year if marriage - these wrinkled, arthritic hands can testify to your words. If we remain young at heart, the world stays brighter and feels lighter. Thanks for sharing your perspective.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Your words are deeply touching and beautifully convey the strength and love that has endured for over half a century. Staying young at heart truly does illuminate life in the brightest and most meaningful ways. Your journey together is a testament to the power of love, resilience, and unwavering companionship.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated, and I agree.
-You wrote a good lune with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and near rhyme with
"entwine" and "time."
-A very good opening line that
creates a good word picture.
-A very good second line,
and the final lines shows how
love is able to endure through time.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated, and I agree.
-You wrote a good lune with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and near rhyme with
"entwine" and "time."
-A very good opening line that
creates a good word picture.
-A very good second line,
and the final lines shows how
love is able to endure through time.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Your thoughtful feedback is truly appreciated. Your detailed analysis highlights the strengths of the poem and offers a well-rounded critique. It's wonderful to see such supportive and constructive comments that can help writers grow and succeed. Best of luck to the poet in the contest!
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You are very welcome for the feedback and "well-rounded critique. I am glad it was meaningful to you. Good wishes are also appreciated. I enjoy reviewing, especially when the poem has something to say in a creative way. Have a great rest of your day and weekend.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Exactly! Love can deepen with age when wisdom steps in and spreads a loving embrace over all of a couple and their children, grandchildren, and extended family.
This speaks to the many who doubt their love as their fear of old age diseases such as dementia sets in, yet even that can bring a couple closer together.
Jesse
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Exactly! Love can deepen with age when wisdom steps in and spreads a loving embrace over all of a couple and their children, grandchildren, and extended family.
This speaks to the many who doubt their love as their fear of old age diseases such as dementia sets in, yet even that can bring a couple closer together.
Jesse
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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ou've beautifully expressed the profound ways in which love can grow and transform over time, Jesse. Wisdom gained through shared experiences and challenges indeed strengthens the bonds between couples, extending that love to their children, grandchildren, and beyond.
The fear of aging and illnesses like dementia is real, but as you've highlighted, these trials can also deepen the connection and bring couples even closer together. Love is remarkably resilient and adaptable, capable of providing comfort and strength even in the face of life's toughest challenges.
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I am glad we are on the same page.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Jesse
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Take care Jesse and stay safe and healthy.
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You too, Peter. Thanks for your good wishes for my safety and health.
Jesse
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Take care
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When both parties age together there is more mutual respect as we enjoy the company of someone we have long history with, the love then deepens. I enjoyed your poignant poem for the contest Peter, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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When both parties age together there is more mutual respect as we enjoy the company of someone we have long history with, the love then deepens. I enjoyed your poignant poem for the contest Peter, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Hi Dolly
My wife and I met in 1967 and married 3 years later. What I have found is that love will overcome all that life will throw at you.
Thank you for your lovely words.
Take care and stay warm
Love Peter
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Long may your happy marriage continue Peter x x x
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Thank you Dolly and stay Safe
Love
PeterXX
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nicely written LUNE poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. Your presentation is lovely. May you have a very blessed weekend and may you also have a very merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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This is a very nicely written LUNE poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. Your presentation is lovely. May you have a very blessed weekend and may you also have a very merry Christmas.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you for lovely words.
Take care.
Blessings.
