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Reawakening

Questioning mother earth

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Comment from Peter Jarvis
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Your Mondo poem beautifully captures the cycle of life and the wisdom found in nature. The question and answer format is thoughtfully crafted, reflecting a deep understanding and respect for the natural world. The imagery of leaves and rebirth is both soothing and profound, embodying the essence of Zen philosophy.

It's wonderful to see how you express such meaningful concepts through this poetic form

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
    Thank you for your kind words. There always welcomed with open arms and eyes to see what mother earth has to offer. Thanks again and may you have a blessed day. Shadrach
reply by Peter Jarvis on 12-Dec-2024
    Take care
Comment from Lindsey Russell
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This poem is a very unique and beautiful tribute to Fall. It's very well written as well. Good luck with this poem and thanks for sharing. Happy writing!

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
    Thank you for your kind words and the reply. May we all find peace today to see all before us, truly to embrace life's beauty from our mother earth. Shadrach
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A wonderful reflection on the circle of life in the natural world... Good use of the Mondo poem here! ;) Thanx for sharing your pen with us today! ;) ;)

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
    Thank you for your kind words and always appreciate thoughts and wisdom from another. May we all stay warm and grateful for the days to come.
Comment from Nicki.B
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I have never seen a Mondo poem before. So thanks a lot for introducing me to it!
I must say really enjoyed this this where there is a question/answer scenario and you did a great job too. What an interesting question and excellent answer. A poem of positivity and hope, well done.
Best Wishes
Nicki

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
    Thank you for your reply. I do find it comforting to review all new works to shine new light. Especially, when I'm not feeling the words to write. I appreciate all your thoughts and kind words to keep writing on. Happy Holidays Shadrach