Comment from Claire Tennant

Exceptional

Congratulations. This deserved to win irrespective of the number of contestants! God Bless you. I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much Claire for your lovely comments and stellar review. I'm honored.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

reply by Claire Tennant on 20-Nov-2024

Luv and stuff had me chuffed Claire

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A beautifully fluent and rhyming verse which gently gives thanks and prayers for others, known or otherwise, ending with my favourite stanza #4. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much for your lovely comments and review!

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Oh this is simply an inspirational and beautiful prayer expressed in these stanzas- a real sense of peace and calm pervades the stanzas - makes one wonder why more people don't pray

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024

Thank so very much for your lovely comments and review!

Comment from Senyai

Excellent

Hi Anonymous,

What a beautiful gentle prayer that flowed flawlessly down the page Perfect meter let the reader connect to your supplication and feel your emotion. Lovely image that enhanced your prayer that touched my heart.

All the best,
Senyai

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much for your lovely comments and review!

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Good

A fine entry for the contest with a wonderful depth... Just a few grammatical corrections below... Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck! ;)

just a greatful prayer --> just a grateful prayer

faith will like mine will grow --> faith will, like mine, grow OR faith will grow like mine

wound'rous --> wondrous

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024

Thanks so much Y.M. Roger for reviewing and catching these typos. I'm working on a smartphone and am legally blind so I need to be more careful

Comment from Lana Marie

Excellent

I really like this one. It flowed so well. The rhythm and the cadence with your syllables and writing choices made this very enjoyable.

I did notice that I think you have an extra "will" in this sentence.... if you remove the one in parentheses your sentence, will flow like the rest.

I pray their faith (will) like mine will grow

Happy writing, good job!
Lana

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024

Thank you so much Lana for your review and for catching that typo.
Take care!