An Ode to Innocence
A 5-7-5 Ode Poem8 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 ode poetry writing prompt. Beautiful poem that I wish adults to find a way to emulate. children could lead us to a perfect world.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 ode poetry writing prompt. Beautiful poem that I wish adults to find a way to emulate. children could lead us to a perfect world.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as alwats very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, An Ode to Innocence, has the proper formatting and finds that the hatred and mistrust is not inherited but programed into the minds of people.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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This 5-7-5, An Ode to Innocence, has the proper formatting and finds that the hatred and mistrust is not inherited but programed into the minds of people.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as aways very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from tfawcus
How true this is. There is no colour bar amongst young children unless imposed by their parents. I wish you all good fortune in the contest. There is much we can learn from our offspring.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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How true this is. There is no colour bar amongst young children unless imposed by their parents. I wish you all good fortune in the contest. There is much we can learn from our offspring.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your very understanding review
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great poem. It is simple, but gets the point across. The picture is perfect for this poem. Children don't know hate until it's taught to them. Unfortunately, here in the south prejudice still reigns and it's sad. It's generational.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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This is a great poem. It is simple, but gets the point across. The picture is perfect for this poem. Children don't know hate until it's taught to them. Unfortunately, here in the south prejudice still reigns and it's sad. It's generational.
Cecilia
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, yes, it is sad
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You're welcome
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Such a powerful message! The way you express the need for peace through the innocence of children is so moving. "Hugs not bullets" is perfect. It's a call for kindness and love. I really appreciate the message in your poem. Beautifully said in so few words!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Such a powerful message! The way you express the need for peace through the innocence of children is so moving. "Hugs not bullets" is perfect. It's a call for kindness and love. I really appreciate the message in your poem. Beautifully said in so few words!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you for your very understanding and uplifting comments
Comment from zanya
Yes our beloved children and young people they are the future and here is an ode to them and to what they can teach us the adults - let's cherish them
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Yes our beloved children and young people they are the future and here is an ode to them and to what they can teach us the adults - let's cherish them
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from Nicki.B
They sure do but unfortunately they become innocent instant sufferers and victims if war. Beautiful image and message. Well done.
Best Wishes
Nicki xx
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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They sure do but unfortunately they become innocent instant sufferers and victims if war. Beautiful image and message. Well done.
Best Wishes
Nicki xx
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Children are innocent and show their true feelings and it is only when they receive a biased education do they change as adults, I enjoyed your fine wise words here, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Children are innocent and show their true feelings and it is only when they receive a biased education do they change as adults, I enjoyed your fine wise words here, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 14-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much