My Heart Was Beguiled
Upon seeing a young mountain girl visiting an Irish Fair.3 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This rhyming verse is so delightfully musical it could practically be sung. I love the description of the young mountain girl which has brought her to instant life and affection. My favourite line: By her languid demeanour, betraying no care." Lovely! Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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This rhyming verse is so delightfully musical it could practically be sung. I love the description of the young mountain girl which has brought her to instant life and affection. My favourite line: By her languid demeanour, betraying no care." Lovely! Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Many thanks, Debbie.
Comment from Bill Schott
This ten-line poem, My Heart was Beguiled, has the proper formatting and reads the heart of the young lover who has spied the girl of many splendid dream.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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This ten-line poem, My Heart was Beguiled, has the proper formatting and reads the heart of the young lover who has spied the girl of many splendid dream.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Bill.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is simply captivating! Your words paint such a clear image of this mysterious figure. The way you describe each detail is delightful. I love your descriptions from the "tinkling laugh" to the "piercing pale eyes".
Such an enjoyable read - I could almost see her strolling by!
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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This is simply captivating! Your words paint such a clear image of this mysterious figure. The way you describe each detail is delightful. I love your descriptions from the "tinkling laugh" to the "piercing pale eyes".
Such an enjoyable read - I could almost see her strolling by!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024
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So kind, Michael. Thank you.