Puzzle of the Mind
An unsolvable enigma3 total reviews
Comment from RJ Heritage
This one caught my eyes more than the others, it has a rhythm and rhyme that flow effortlessly. However, I am certain it took quite some doing. Well done. Mystery poem. Good luck in the contest.
RJ
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This one caught my eyes more than the others, it has a rhythm and rhyme that flow effortlessly. However, I am certain it took quite some doing. Well done. Mystery poem. Good luck in the contest.
RJ
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
Comment from Katiemae1977
This is such a good monotetra and they are not easy to write.
Your meter is perfect, your rhymes, outstanding. I liked your overall subject matter as well.
Bravo mystery poet and good luck in the contest!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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This is such a good monotetra and they are not easy to write.
Your meter is perfect, your rhymes, outstanding. I liked your overall subject matter as well.
Bravo mystery poet and good luck in the contest!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Katie,
Thank you for your six star review. I value and appreciate your comments. I consider 6 star reviews as a win.
All the best,
BB50
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great poem. I like how it rhymes and flows nicely to completion. It often feels like our brain and thoughts are in a million pieces that need to be put together in the right order. If not are mind will stay scattered.
On a good day I feel like my brain is missing a piece to the puzzle (ha, ha)
Great job and good luck with your contest.
Cecilia
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This is a great poem. I like how it rhymes and flows nicely to completion. It often feels like our brain and thoughts are in a million pieces that need to be put together in the right order. If not are mind will stay scattered.
On a good day I feel like my brain is missing a piece to the puzzle (ha, ha)
Great job and good luck with your contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 10-Nov-2024