Comment from Gayla putnam

Excellent

I laughed so hard that tears ran down my cheeks. I have never read a script before, and this is truly funny. Or maybe I'm just in a state of hysteria after the election. I loved the line she spent her whole life squatting to pee. It's a clever piece, and I wait with bated breath for the continuing saga of Pres. Dump. gayla

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024

Thanks, Gayla

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Still love these characters and their lingo, the subject is very impressive, the way you have carved up the campaign promises and (lies) is genius, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024

Thank you, kahpot

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

LOL This needs to be made into a weekly series! Completely believeable says the media machine! You have a gift for scripts. Thanks for sharing....

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024

Thank you, Marilyn. The fact that reality is weirder than fiction still blows me away.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Since I'm fasting from the news, I can only get the latest from you and from Snopes.com Thanks for a glimpse of what could have been. Somewhere there is a gentler and kinder government in an alternative universe. Sigh.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024

Seeing what's happening now, Ned may be overqualified.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

I could live with Ned as leader, at least he is not a vindictive pissant who gets mad and throws a hissy fit whenever he can't get his way. He has a habit of going off script, if he makes his handlers too angry, the next attempt will be flawless, and a convenient patsy will be found and executed before he can be questioned.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024

Yes, Ned is better.