Last Words
To rid yourself before being rid of2 total reviews
Comment from Brandy N. Morrison
This poem captivates with its opening line, creating anticipation and a sense of vulnerability. The contrast between "I gave away my secrets, and died" suggests the sacrifices we make for growth. It's a powerful metaphor that invites reflection on personal transformation. Overall, it's brief but deeply impactful, leaving you pondering the costs of revealing yourself.
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This poem captivates with its opening line, creating anticipation and a sense of vulnerability. The contrast between "I gave away my secrets, and died" suggests the sacrifices we make for growth. It's a powerful metaphor that invites reflection on personal transformation. Overall, it's brief but deeply impactful, leaving you pondering the costs of revealing yourself.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A unique and intriguing thought for the contest here... I would suggest, however, using a different formatting as your offering appears simply as a sentence rather than as a 20-syllable poem. In these short formats, punctuation is unnecessary as it is superseded by format of author choice... one such suggestion is given below... Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
In those days
leading up to my arrival
I gave away my secrets
and died
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A unique and intriguing thought for the contest here... I would suggest, however, using a different formatting as your offering appears simply as a sentence rather than as a 20-syllable poem. In these short formats, punctuation is unnecessary as it is superseded by format of author choice... one such suggestion is given below... Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
In those days
leading up to my arrival
I gave away my secrets
and died
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024