Willing Hearts
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Comment from Wendy G
Despite the image, I did not think Sami would end up stuck in a tree with a steer below. Good job Jasper was able to get away safely. Sami does seem to jump to conclusions without giving Noah a chance to finish his sentence and the tears do come readily. I hope Noah continues to have patience with her. Well written and engaging story.
Wendy
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Despite the image, I did not think Sami would end up stuck in a tree with a steer below. Good job Jasper was able to get away safely. Sami does seem to jump to conclusions without giving Noah a chance to finish his sentence and the tears do come readily. I hope Noah continues to have patience with her. Well written and engaging story.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I found no errors and was entertained by this chapter. Sami does have a flair for getting into trouble. Noah now seems devoted to her, but he is going to have to make a job change if their relationship is going to work.
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I found no errors and was entertained by this chapter. Sami does have a flair for getting into trouble. Noah now seems devoted to her, but he is going to have to make a job change if their relationship is going to work.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
Comment from Douglas Goff
Ha! I was chuckling at the treed woman myself. Then I realized that I wouldn't have gotten down either. Steers can be nasty!
Good fun read. This seems to be wrapping up nicely!
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Ha! I was chuckling at the treed woman myself. Then I realized that I wouldn't have gotten down either. Steers can be nasty!
Good fun read. This seems to be wrapping up nicely!
D
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
Comment from DonandVicki
A good addition to your well composed book. The line that made me take notice was this: " "Yes, males are in danger too. Human trafficking doesn't only affect females." You often think about the young girls and forget about the horrors that young men go through.
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A good addition to your well composed book. The line that made me take notice was this: " "Yes, males are in danger too. Human trafficking doesn't only affect females." You often think about the young girls and forget about the horrors that young men go through.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
Comment from Barry Penfold
A well written chapter and a nice close on a topic that is both awful and underestimated by many. It is though we are back in the dark ages. sometimes I think we have never left the. Thanks for sharing and take care.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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A well written chapter and a nice close on a topic that is both awful and underestimated by many. It is though we are back in the dark ages. sometimes I think we have never left the. Thanks for sharing and take care.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
Comment from royowen
I can imagine it wouldn't be easy to be married to someone like Sami, one would have to worry where the next change of wind would come, I would've been in trouble with Elaine a lot more than I was. Having longhorns stroll by would be like kangaroos bounding past our doors here, heh heh, well done Barbara, blessings Roy
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I can imagine it wouldn't be easy to be married to someone like Sami, one would have to worry where the next change of wind would come, I would've been in trouble with Elaine a lot more than I was. Having longhorns stroll by would be like kangaroos bounding past our doors here, heh heh, well done Barbara, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
Comment from judiverse
Tell Sami she doesn't need to get all upset and tearful over everything that happens. It looks like things are getting close to wrapped up with Chen's capture. He'll probably have a high-priced lawyer, though. I was wondering where you'd go with the Longhorn steer. It was funny, and Sami being in the tree was, too. You are following Dickens's advice--make 'em laugh, make 'em cry, make 'em wait. Great chapter. I've been think about it, and for future stories you might want to include just a brief summary instead of the ending from the previous chapter. judi
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Tell Sami she doesn't need to get all upset and tearful over everything that happens. It looks like things are getting close to wrapped up with Chen's capture. He'll probably have a high-priced lawyer, though. I was wondering where you'd go with the Longhorn steer. It was funny, and Sami being in the tree was, too. You are following Dickens's advice--make 'em laugh, make 'em cry, make 'em wait. Great chapter. I've been think about it, and for future stories you might want to include just a brief summary instead of the ending from the previous chapter. judi
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
Comment from nomi338
This story has consistently pleased me. I am totally invested in it. As eager as I am to read the final outcome, I know that I will be sad to see the story end. So, I am totally conflicted. Great job of writing.
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This story has consistently pleased me. I am totally invested in it. As eager as I am to read the final outcome, I know that I will be sad to see the story end. So, I am totally conflicted. Great job of writing.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
Comment from GWHARGIS
i swear I thought Galvin had something to do with Sami not coming back from peach picking. I was not expecting the long horned steer to be the culprit. I did enjoy this chapter especially the fact that Sami was focusing on Sarah and her pregnancy. Very good reading. Gretchen
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i swear I thought Galvin had something to do with Sami not coming back from peach picking. I was not expecting the long horned steer to be the culprit. I did enjoy this chapter especially the fact that Sami was focusing on Sarah and her pregnancy. Very good reading. Gretchen
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Did you notice how much that steer looks like a bison? With a female president we will a different point of view in some of our important matters. Like weddings for children, I hope. Good writing. Karen
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Did you notice how much that steer looks like a bison? With a female president we will a different point of view in some of our important matters. Like weddings for children, I hope. Good writing. Karen
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Very interesting perception. Thank you for the kind review.
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